megaviper Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Chapter 1: Jealous (Part 1)Neil was a kid who loved to play the Yu-Gi-Oh Trading Card game. So far, he had won every single duel that he had been in. Else where in the city, a guy named Alister had gotten news about Neil's winning streak. He became very jealous. So, Alister decided that he was going to challenge Neil to a duel. The next day, Neil had received the challenge, and accepted. He came to the dueling arena where he was supposed to duel Alister. That was when the duel began. Neil: 4000Alister: 4000 "Allow me to go first. I play Baby Dragon face up in attack mode, and I also place one card face down!" said Alister.The hologram of Baby Dragon appeared on the field. Now it was Neil's turn. Neil drew a card, and summoned a monster called Alligator's Swprd face up in attack mode. Right when Neil was about to declare battle, Alister activated the face down card that he had placed. It was a spell card called Raigeki. Alligator's Sword was destroyed, and sent to the graveyard."Ha! Now you have no monsters on your field to protect your life points, so I am going to have my Baby Dragon attack your life points directly!" said Alister.Baby Dragon attacked Neil's life points directly. Neil: 2800Alister: 4000 Neil gasped. He was afraid that he was going to lose a duel for the very first time! To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaviper Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Chapter 2: Jealous (Part 2)"I summon Rainbow Parrot face up in attack mode!" Neil said, summoning his monster onto the field.The hologram of a parrot with rainbow colored feathers appeared on the field. Rainbow Parrot:ATK: 1800 "Allow me to tell you what Rainbow Parrot's special ability is! Rainbow Parrot can attack twice in the same turn, but this effect can only be used one time in a duel! So, I think that I am going to use Rainbow Parrot's ability now!" said Neil.Rainbow Parrot attacked Baby Dragon. Baby Dragon was destroyed. Neil: 2800Alister: 3500 "Now, I am going to have Rainbow Parrot attack your life points directly!" exclaimed Neil.Rainbow Parrot attacked Alister's life points directly. Neil: 2800Alister: 1700 "But this is not the end of my turn, because I am going to use the spell card that is known as Ookazi, which does 800 points of damage to your life points!" exclaimed Neil. Neil: 2800Alister: 800 Alister gasped. He had not expected Neil to be this good of a duelist! Alister drew a card from his deck, wondering if he had any card that could defeat Rainbow Parrot... He had no cards in his hand that he could use in order to win the duel, so he had no choice. He ended his turn. Now, Rainbow Parrot attacked Alister's life points directly. Neil: 2800Alister: 0 "It's over! I win!" exclaimed Neil.Alister lowered his head sadly.Chapter 3: Real Monster SightingsNeil was watching television. When he turned to the news, he saw something shocking. "As you know, the popular Yu-Gi-Oh trading card game can be played on either a dueling arena, or a duel disk. When using these devices, holograms of the monsters are created. Just holograms of the monsters have been seen... until now... recently, there have been sightings of monsters throughout the world, and these monsters look exactly like the card games' monsters!" said the news reporter.Neil gasped in horror. He had never expected that the monsters were real!Chapter 4: Buster BladerIt was night time, and Neil was walking down a dark alley. All of a sudden, there was a flash. Neil noticed that the flash had come from a suit of armor, and thing that was wearing the armor, was the Yu-Gi-Oh monster known as Buster Blader. Neil gasped. He looked around, there were no signs of hologram projectors, which meant that this Buster Blader was real!"Human, do you know anything about portals that have been appearing in your world?" asked Buster Blader.Neil gasped. Buster Blader could talk!"Uh... no..." Neil muttered in shock."Yeah, well, it appears that until another portal appears, that I am stuck with you!" said Buster Blader.Neil gasped. Therer was no way that his parents were going to let him keep a Yu-Gi-Oh monster in his house."I know what you are thinking, human! So, the only way that I can stay with you is by doing this!" Buster Blader said, beginning to glow.There was a bright flash, and Buster Blader;s card appeared in Neil's hand."Happy now?" Buster Blader asked from inside of his card.Neil couldn't believe what was happening to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Graystone Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 The chapters could be longer, and the duels would be better if lengthened,but otherwise it's a good story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaviper Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Thanks for the tip. Maybe I should give them more life points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 I think its good, but maybe with 8000 Life points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaviper Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 NOTE: I HAVE DECIDED TO RENAME RAINBOW PARROT. NOW, IT'S COLOR PARROT... Chapter 5: Alister Returns (Part 1)There was a knock on Neil's front door. Neil answered the door, and was surprised to see that the person that was knocking was Alister. Alister held up his arm, there was a duel disk strapped to it."I want a rematch! This time, I am going to be the one that wins!" said Alister.Neil pulled out his duel disk, strapped it to his arm, and the duel began. Neil: 8000Alister: 8000 "I summon Color Parrot in attack mode! Now it's your turn!" said Neil, ending his turn.Alister drew a card from his deck. He looked at the card that he had just drawn, and grinned."I summon Armed Dragon Lv3!" said Alister."But, my Color Parrot is stronger! Armed Dragon Lv3 only has 1200 attack!" laughed Neil."Stop mocking me!" said a voice.Neil gasped. The voice was coming from Armed Dragon Lv3! Alister had gotten one of the real monsters! There was a bright flash, and Armed Dragon Lv3 transformed into Armed Dragon Lv5. Neil gasped. Armed Dragon attacked, andd Color Parrot was destroyed. Neil: 7400Alister 8000 Now, it was Neil's turn. He drew a card from his deck."I summon Color Dragon in attack mode!" said Neil. Color Dragon:ATK: 2500 Color Dragon attacked. Alister activated a trap card that he had secretly played. Mirror Force. Color Dragon was sent to the graveyard. Neil had no choice. He ended his turn. Armed Dragon attacked Neil's life points directly. Neil: 5000Alister: 8000 Neil drew a card from his deck. he grinned."I summon Buster Blader!" said Neil. Buster Blader:ATK: 2600 "It's about time that I came into this duel!" Buster Blader complained.Now, it was real monster vs real monster! To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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