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Here's another wording fix-up.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending any number of FIRE Monster Cards from your hand to the Graveyard. The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the number of FIRE monsters sent to the Graveyard to Special Summon it x 800. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard have 1 face-up monster your opponent controls lose ATK equal to the ATK of the removed monster. When this card is destroyed, you can send 2 FIRE monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 2 "Forged Tokens" (Machine-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 1200/DEF 500) to your field. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon.

 

Things to note:

 

Discard can only be when what you're sending from your hand to the Graveyard is unspecified, otherwise it's send ______ from your hand to the Graveyard.

 

-The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to, not The original ATK and DEF of this card are both equal to.

 

-It's remove from play _______, not remove ____ from play, that's outdated.

 

-Decrease is outdated, gain and lose are used now.

 

-For Tokens, say Level 3, not 3-Star.

 

-We aren't going to get Master Rule OCG, english Stardust Dragons say Tribute on them. Check wikia.

 

The picture's ok, but the fire looks too cloud-like and the upper-left corner is too empty.

 

Not bad. ^_^ 7.6/10 from me.

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Here's another wording fix-up.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending any number of FIRE Monster Cards from your hand to the Graveyard. The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the number of FIRE monsters sent to the Graveyard to Special Summon it x 800. Once per turn' date=' you can remove from play 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard have 1 face-up monster your opponent controls lose ATK equal to the ATK of the removed monster. When this card is destroyed, you can send 2 FIRE monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 2 "Forged Tokens" (Machine-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 1200/DEF 500) to your field. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon.

 

Things to note:

 

Discard can only be when what you're sending from your hand to the Graveyard is unspecified, otherwise it's send ______ from your hand to the Graveyard.

 

-The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to, not The original ATK and DEF of this card are both equal to.

 

-It's remove from play _______, not remove ____ from play, that's outdated.

 

-Decrease is outdated, gain and lose are used now.

 

-For Tokens, say Level 3, not 3-Star.

 

-We aren't going to get Master Rule OCG, english Stardust Dragons say Tribute on them. Check wikia.

 

The picture's ok, but the fire looks too cloud-like and the upper-left corner is too empty.

 

Not bad. ^_^ 7.6/10 from me.

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Thanks Void, that has to be arguably the best comment given about the card......

 

Actually, I got a certain someone to fix up my original wording, but yours seems very nice, thanks!

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