Master Shade Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 okay i have remade all the red moon cards i hope there not over powering if so please tell me and give me some pointers that will help thank you :D here's one: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rscrash Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 [align=center]holy **** on a ****ing sandwich with **** on top!With a side order of ****! Sorry, I have just been watching yu-gi-oh abridged! Anyway, looks good but do you by any chance have a card like this? Because I made that and your set is called Red Moon so I was just wondering because when I read the title I thought you had ripped my card off...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Shade Posted August 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 ?no sorry i did not copy your cards i hade a set made but some people said there abit too overpowering the ones i made are "Red Moon Saga" sorry i didnt put saga in to the post subject Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rscrash Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 oh no i know you didnt, I was just wondering, anyway where can I see these cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 A bit strange. And the grammar kinda sucks. But I suppose they are okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Shade Posted August 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 umm what do you mean?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 Grammar is the study of rules governing the use of language. The set of rules governing a particular language is the grammar of that language; thus' date=' each language can be said to have its own distinct grammar. Note that the word grammar has two meanings here: the first is the inner rules themselves and the second is our description and study of those rules. When a grammar is fully explicit about all possible constructions within a specific language, it is called generative grammar. A particular type of generative grammar that has become the leading framework in modern linguistics is transformational grammar which was first proposed by Noam Chomsky. Grammar is part of the general study of language called linguistics. Grammar is a way of thinking about language. As the word is understood by most modern linguists, the subfields of grammar are phonetics, phonology, orthography, morphology, syntax, semantics, and pragmatics. Traditionally, however, grammar included only morphology and syntax.[/quote'] That. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Shade Posted August 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 .....i know that i suck at grammer :( you dont have to be mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 I like it. But the text should be more like: "As long as this card remains on the field, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster with "Holy" or "Daemonic" in its name form your deck or your hand during your second Standby Phase after activation." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Shade Posted August 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2007 the spell's & traps are almost done id like to get 10 of each finished then i'll start on the effect monster's then normal(not sure about normal) anywho :3 so far so good right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted August 5, 2007 Report Share Posted August 5, 2007 You can only activate this card when a monster attacks. Negate the attack, and increase your Life Points equal to the ATK of the attacking monster, then return 1 monster on your side of the field back to your hand. I made a few changes to the 1st card. For 1 I made it so you can activate the card when your monster attacks as well. The reason for this is because the 2nd part of the card says you have to return a monster on your side of the field back to your hand, and if you do it when your monster attacks we know that you have a monster on your side of the field. If it were just your opponents monster attacks, you could use it when you have no monsters on your side of the field. So I think that balances it out. I think it needs a better Image or a different name? Either way an image depicting a girl carrying another girl on her back has nothing to do with the kind of effect the card has. I have an image that may be reasonable? Goblin's Revenge He is going to halt your opponents attack with a sneak attack which will catch them off guard, he will then rob your opponent of his Life Points(money)?. Thats what thieves want, and then run away because he is a criminal, and a weakling who will probably be chased down later. From that little background story it fits all aspects of the cards description. Negate Attack, Increase Life, Returning your own monster Drawback, and he does look like a ghost?? Also the Cards Circulation isn't "3". It should be First Edition, Unlimited Edition or Limited Edition, and the set number doesn't need to be "00001". It can just be 001. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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