Sayaka Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 This is my card about Apollo...God Of The Sun....with yours fix..I think that would be perfect... XDD -This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 6 Fairy-Type monsters in your Deck from play. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent Life Points, your opponent skips his/her next Draw Phases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 "Attacks" not attack. This reminds me of those match winners. You should lessen its ATK and DEF more to balance it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 3000+ ATK, and I know it isn't going to work. Plus, the "match-winners" aren't really realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I would write it like this: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 8 Fairy-Type monsters from your deck from play."The rest is ok. If you decrease it`s ATK and DEF, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Here...i've correct some things...thanks at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Ur welcome! It's better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Yeah... thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Seems alright.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Thank's dem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 I can't help you with the OCG. I can help you with regular grammar though... "-This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 6 Fairy-Type monsters in your Deck from play. This card is not affected by your opponent's Spell Cards. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent Life Points, your opponent skips his/her next 2 Draw Phases. " As far as OCG I really suck at that. :| I like the effect though. I could understand it. And I like the pic. 7/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 TOO POWERFUL! A card that with an essentially costless summoning requirement, with immunity against Spells, and a 2-Draw Phase-skipping effect? GIRL, FIX THIS THING, AND FAST! 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 I've fixed the card with yours fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 I have to say that this card is overpowered.With that attack & effect, it has over 90% chance to give the opponent something like a Yata-Lock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 So...need to decrease the atk points and change the effect with "skips his/her next Draw Phases." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sagamang2 Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 may i ask were you get all these pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Weaken it. The summoning requirement, I dare say, is a joke. Have this in your hand on your first turn, and you'll have a 3000 attacker, pronto. Weaken it. Making your opponent skip your Draw Phase is a very dangerous mechanic to fiddle with; of the few cards that flirt with it, two (Yata-Garasu and Time Seal) are banned, and the other (Fenrir) can only do so when it destroys a monster. Weaken it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 So...need to decrease the atk points and change the effect with "skips his/her next Draw Phases."yeah...I suggest that you reduce the attack by half Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 By Half?? So much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aashar Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Nice card Sayaka 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Oh thank's akon XDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 why am i in a gloriouse shock whenever i see your cards. They just surprise me soo much. Reps from me to you Signiture ~ Gphaku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Pretty good, 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Thank's gphaku ....you are a pretty boy !!! XDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Thank's gphaku ....you are a pretty boy !!! XDD umm, ima girl. I fell so sad right now *goes to corner and cries* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Oh sorry...it's so difficult understeand by the nickname.......please...excuse me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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