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CORRUPTION MONSTERS!! {GIVE HELP AND WILL +REP!} (NOOB HUNTER'S ADDITION ADDED!)


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interesting idea..

 

it would have been more impressive if you made it an archetype, and wrote the way they work on the card effect and gave them more simple effects.

 

the card splice is just seeming to get old...

 

but good job nonetheless. ^_^

 

7.8/10

 

 

-Kale

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I like the cards, and the picture work. You don't need Photoshop to do it though, just Paint and a lot of patience.

I really enjoy the idea of Corruption Monsters, and, with your leave, I'd like to put one of my own here.

Please enjoy "Cybernetic Zombie Suit":

[spoiler=Cybernetic Zombie Suit]CyberneticZombieSuit.jpg

His text was made quickly because of the amount of time it took to assemble the actual card splice. If this guy isn't limited to 1 per deck, he's banned.

 

 

 

Now, "Carnage" and "Manipulator" are well-balanced, but "Wasteland" needs to lose its primary effect (the one about LP damage being cut in half). With that, and some OCG fixes that I'm too lazy to point out, you've got a great set! I really hope to see more! :mrgreen:

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I like the cards' date=' and the picture work. You don't need Photoshop to do it though, just Paint and a lot of patience.

I really enjoy the idea of Corruption Monsters, and, with your leave, I'd like to put one of my own here.

Please enjoy "Cybernetic Zombie Suit":

[spoiler=Cybernetic Zombie Suit']CyberneticZombieSuit.jpg

His text was made quickly because of the amount of time it took to assemble the actual card splice. If this guy isn't limited to 1 per deck, he's banned.

 

 

 

Now, "Carnage" and "Manipulator" are well-balanced, but "Wasteland" needs to lose its primary effect (the one about LP damage being cut in half). With that, and some OCG fixes that I'm too lazy to point out, you've got a great set! I really hope to see more! :mrgreen:

 

Thanks NOOB hunter i like your card. I'm giving you rep now that i know how for actually helping me improve my cards.

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wow cool i like the corruption sub type this cards are great i like the repute of carnage the most if you equip it with a card that stops it from being destroyed by battle it's ATK points could rocket and even if it was destroyed your opponent would suffer the consequences 10/10 for that card alone 10/10 for the rest as well

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Ohhh... Those last two cards aren't so good. "Elven Queen of Winter" (hereby referred to as "EQW") is messed up in the sense that the ATK and DEF are not question marks, and that she can lock down your opponent's Draw Phase. The only cards I know of that lock down phases are "Yata-Garasu", which is banned, and "Timeater", which is a piece of junk. The Draw Phase is one of the most crucial phases in the game. Being able to lock down that phase gives you almost complete control of the game, because your opponent will not have the chance to retaliate -- not being able to draw cards. Then, that added part about not attacking LP directly doesn't really do much. After all, you can only break something once.

 

"A Last Resort..." is one of those figurehead cards, which seem good, but would only benefit strategy if they were played against a Corruption Deck (which would be unlikely, seeing as there are only 5 Corruption Monsters in the game). Of course, ever set needs a few of these cards, so its good that you added it in. However, you messed up the OCG. Because Corruption is an effect-alternative, you don't refer to your monsters as "Corruption-Type". They would simply be "Corruption Monsters". So I'll rewrite the effect because I love this idea:

 

"You may only activate this card if there are 2 or more Corruption Monsters face-up on the field. Send all face-up Corruption Monsters to their Respective Players' Graveyards, and inflict Direct Damage to both Players' Life Points equal to the number of Corruption Monsters sent to the Graveyard by this effect x300."

 

Feel free to use that to rewrite the OCG (and please rewrite the OCG).

Once again, congratulations on your amazing card idea, and keep at it (just remember to fix your last 2)! :mrgreen:

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Repute of Carnage: A great card, though I shudder to think what happens if it gets a Gyroid.

 

Black Dragon of the Wasteland: What are you trying to say here? "your opponent inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points"

 

Manipulator of Thunder: With the state of said Type as of now, I'll say this card's a stinkbomb.

 

Elven Queen of Summer: A Corruption searcher? Why not?

 

Elven Queen of Winter: Oh noes! A lost Draw Phase... for a mere 500 LP? NO!

 

A Last Resort to Cure the Corruption: A really long, unneeded, name, with an effect that will be used only against Corruption monsters.

 

'Nuff said.

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