overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Please Tell Me if i have any ocg errors. if so plz tell what they are and i will edit. if someone does a page on this card for thier card of the day, week, ect.., pm me with a link and i will give 1 rep and ten points. i really want to hear what you guys think =). Please rate. After much conflict i have completly redone the card. please make all coments about this new one. as before plz rate and tell whats wrong ONLY if you are going to tell me a way to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 bad pic bad holo ocg makes no sense, of if it does, its overpowered. try harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 okay then, anysugestions as to make it better if its horible and overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 the picture is bad & it's overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Okay, again ty for telling me it sucks, now tell me how so and how to corect it! >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 1. If its your opponent's turn, paying 1k to negate a summoning is a constant horn of heaven, BUT, the downside is never there, you dont attack on your opponent's turn. 2. The second effect is just overpowered when you combine the first effect. Your opponent cant take it down once a turn, and you negate their monster summoning. Its just overpowered. 3. Get a better pic, your card looks too white for its own good. It just looks like one big white card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Way overpowered. Pitiful image. It sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Ok, i am working on the image and editing a new one. i will change it to "this card can not attack during your next turn". i will find a better cost such as 1000 lp and tributing a monster. i will find a better secon effect other than can not be destroyed. how about " you take no Battle dammage from a battle involving this card" that sound good? i really am dedicated to making my bad cards better and highly aprichiate the feedback especiially from hunter. i will update it within the next 15 minutes so if you have objections to my changes state them quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kohake Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 I, like the outheres thisnk it's a bad card, but if you do what you just said then it would become mcuh better. I've seen people make worse cards and they don't even care what poeple say, so thanks for trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Bumb(updated) ty for believing in me kohake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kohake Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 The new one is much better. Decent pic, good effect, well balanced and creative. A solid defence with an alternativ of attack. Well done! I would rate it 7-8/10, and I susally give poeple below 6. And no problem, I bleive in anyone who cares to listen. Btw, PM me if you want to see my cards, thy aren't all done yet, so I won't be posting them ont he forums for quite a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 take the last part off or lower the attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 okay, will lower attack. how does 2700 sound? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 hhmm.... make it 2500. That sounds better to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 ok, will do. =P should i make its level 6, 7, or 8? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 believe it or not. I have a dark resonater myself. (of course in japanese) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Well I've seen the bottom one after it was updated and I think it's nice for a lvl 9 synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 i ill keep it lv 9 then, ty for help. where are you hunter? have you even seen the update? i need your input before i post next update oh most helpfull editor of the first. btwive got a stardust, a thought ruler, a dark resognator of corse, a magical android, in fact an intire psychic deck yesterdays pree release was the most sucsessfull one ive been to. my friend bought 500 bucks and we bought out every pack in the store along with the entire box of 10 cent commens. we sure put bread on those refs tables =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 I'd say, 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 I'd say' date=' 3/10.[/quote'] Why? Whats Wrong? im Intruiged To Know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 lower the stats a little, and work on some minor OCG issues and your fine. much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 minor ocg issues like what!!! i need info plz i dont seem to be able to find them myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 hmm... the first version is overpowered. the second version is slightly less overpowered, but still is. plus, it doesnt have any life point cost, like all of the Psychics do. i would suggest adding in a life point cost to negate the damage done to you... that would make more sense and balance it out. ;) 7/10 -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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