Chapter 1&2 in Rise of the Warwolves (Please please please read and rate!!!!!)

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Hello, this is my first fan fic, idk how to do it though =P but ill try, BTW Rise of the Warwolf is actually a set im making... , so here goes nothing.

 

My heart is beating wildly. Many tree stumps lie on the ground, I cannot outrun a wolf. Even if I cannot I will try . Suddenly I feel a claw grab onto my shoulders. My heart skips a beat, I trip, over a tree stump. With the wolf still clinging to my back as I get up I hear more howling at the moon. So I decided I must fight. I picked up a thick stick and begin beating the wolf on my back, eventually it lets go. Then just I as I was watching it begins to stand up on its hind legs. I was startled I have never seen anything so amazing. Still i found the courage to run, the wolf seemed to eventually slow down, and then it was so far away i couldnt even see it. I figured I outran it... But the question is.... Did I?

 

If you all like it i can always write some more of it. Make sure to rate and let me know if you like it. And also im adding a twist to this fan fic, if you can guess what happens at the beginning of my next part you get 3 points, I know it aint alot but think, its predictable =O.

[CrazyMonkey77]

Wow, great work. I can tell you took some time to come up with the plot. Nice work man. I'm guessing the wolf is actually RIGHT BEHIND YOU. Write More!

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Thanks so much for the first post/guess. And actually that's 5 minutes of work =PPPPP

And I'll write more when some other peeps start reading/rating

[Kale]

Thanks so much for the first post/guess. And actually that's 5 minutes of work =PPPPP

And I'll write more when some other peeps start reading/rating

 

@bold: it shows. -.-

 

here is some real fan fic advise:

 

always try to make it long. i always do, and i get good results. i usually work on mine for days, even a week before i post it. ;) read Edge of Justice sometime to see what i mean.

 

you dont have a problem with description, though. ;) very good detail.

 

however, i dont see how this relates to Yugioh at all... it is about a wolf. XD

 

i hope you take my criticism to heart... XD some people say i know what i am doing here. ;)

 

-Kale

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=D Its not over yet =P

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I must rest for the night. I can't build a fire or I may risk bringing one of those things back. I found a cave, and some leaves, which is more then enough luck for the discovery i just made.

 

[align=center]Morning

[/align][align=left][/align] As I make my trip back to the labrotory I heard many strange things. It was as if my eyes can see the unseen. I tried to ingore it and tell myself that it was just that i got a lack of rest. Once i arrived my partner greeted me. "Hello, anything exciting happen?"

"Yes, I believe i have an idea for a new card set." "What will you call it?"

Rise of the- Did you hear that? Hear what professor? That crackling noise. No sir i did not hear it. Well as i was saying its going to be called Rise of the W- You didn't hear that? All i heard was Rise of the W- DUCK!" I ducked in cover but my partner stood there probabally thinking i'm crazy, but then it hit him, A rock hit him in the back of his head. I was left staring at the wolf standing on two legs. Then I heard a deep voice say...

 

I hope you enjoyed it. More to come soon in the "Rise Of The Warwolves" series. Guess what the wolf was about to say, for 5 points.

[CrazyMonkey77]

Genius!

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Crazy monkey guess what the wolf is gonna say, its 5 points if you're right.

[~The Red Crusader~]

It's very good, I liked it! I think he's gonna say: "Sorry, can I have a glass of water?"(joke xD)

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BuMpY