Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 [align=center]well..... as i said before, Chained Effects are hard to word... soooo... yea..rate/comment/critzEdited pix Un-edit pixWhich one is better? DISCLAIMER: i am not the artist of the artwork used in my card..[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 a minor ocg eror i think (although im not realy one to talk) i believe that instead of saying "negate the efect of the card efect that this card is chained to" it should say "negate the efects of all cards in the chain(except "Chain Cyborg Zombie's")other then that its great, although hasnt been given much suport since cyberdark impact.it efect has been used in other "real" cards however it is a great effect. it gets so much suport from spells and traps being a zombie, machine hybrid. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 well im not trying to negate all the cards in the chain... just the card that this effect is chained to........ anywe....................................... thanks for taking the time to view/rate my card..^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Nice Effect,I like the first Version.I give them a 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Nice Effect' date='I like the first Version.I give them a 9.9/10[/quote'] wow.... another almost perfection from you...... awesome..thanks..^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infernape619 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 I like both pics. 1st cause it looks like everything is moving. 2nd because you can actually see......I'm not much help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 no prob^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 I like both pics. 1st cause it looks like everything is moving. 2nd because you can actually see......I'm not much help well comments do help...... it lets me know how viewers like to see made up cards....... thanks. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 When you mean Zombie Negater, were you referring to a card that could, maybe be formally side decked against a Zombie Deck, and hopefully screw your opponent? Maybe, but I would see this card negating more Card of Safe Returns, then something like a massive chain spree leading off from Il Blud. If not, then... yeah ^^. Anyways, this is a pretty good card, balanced. (Of course, it could be some revising with OCG and how the effect is worded, but i am not one to really care about that right now.) Nicely executed Phantasy. 6/10 from me. This is counting picture rating and all that jazz. (BTW, if you have the time, come out and check out my sets. ;)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolkerfan Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 the one without the blur looks better, and i think it would be better if it was higher than common rarity:)p.s. how do you make the pictures, every body does it , but i don't know how. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 When you mean Zombie Negater' date=' were you referring to a card that could, maybe be formally side decked against a Zombie Deck, and hopefully screw your opponent? Maybe, but I would see this card negating more Card of Safe Returns, then something like a massive chain spree leading off from Il Blud. If not, then... yeah ^^.[/quote']hmmhm....^^Zombie Negater- a Zombie-Type Monster that can negate any card's effect when chained its effect..*maybe i spelled Negator wrong.. maybe it should be an "o" and not "e".. ^^ Anyways' date=' this is a pretty good card, balanced. (Of course, it could be some revising with OCG and how the effect is worded, but i am not one to really care about that right now.) Nicely executed Phantasy. 6/10 from me. This is counting picture rating and all that jazz. (BTW, if you have the time, come out and check out my sets. ;))[/quote'] ^^well its not easy to word chaining effects........and surely ill check out your cards/set, but not now.. my eyes are burning from making my cards... >.<hope that dont dissapoint you..^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 When you mean Zombie Negater' date=' were you referring to a card that could, maybe be formally side decked against a Zombie Deck, and hopefully screw your opponent? Maybe, but I would see this card negating more Card of Safe Returns, then something like a massive chain spree leading off from Il Blud. If not, then... yeah ^^.[/quote']hmmhm....^^Zombie Negater- a Zombie-Type Monster that can negate any card's effect when chained its effect..*maybe i spelled Negator wrong.. maybe it should be an "o" and not "e".. ^^ Anyways' date=' this is a pretty good card, balanced. (Of course, it could be some revising with OCG and how the effect is worded, but i am not one to really care about that right now.) Nicely executed Phantasy. 6/10 from me. This is counting picture rating and all that jazz. (BTW, if you have the time, come out and check out my sets. ;))[/quote'] ^^well its not easy to word chaining effects........and surely ill check out your cards/set, but not now.. my eyes are burning from making my cards... >.<hope that dont dissapoint you..^^ Its quite not. I was trying to think of how to revise it for you, but my brain isn't turning its gears right now lol. Seems like you need rest, you'll have nightmares looking at mine ;).And all means, I mean no rush. Take any amount you need, its an invitation that doesn't expire. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 When you mean Zombie Negater' date=' were you referring to a card that could, maybe be formally side decked against a Zombie Deck, and hopefully screw your opponent? Maybe, but I would see this card negating more Card of Safe Returns, then something like a massive chain spree leading off from Il Blud. If not, then... yeah ^^.[/quote']hmmhm....^^Zombie Negater- a Zombie-Type Monster that can negate any card's effect when chained its effect..*maybe i spelled Negator wrong.. maybe it should be an "o" and not "e".. ^^ Anyways' date=' this is a pretty good card, balanced. (Of course, it could be some revising with OCG and how the effect is worded, but i am not one to really care about that right now.) Nicely executed Phantasy. 6/10 from me. This is counting picture rating and all that jazz. (BTW, if you have the time, come out and check out my sets. ;))[/quote'] ^^well its not easy to word chaining effects........and surely ill check out your cards/set, but not now.. my eyes are burning from making my cards... >.<hope that dont dissapoint you..^^ Its quite not. I was trying to think of how to revise it for you, but my brain isn't turning its gears right now lol. Seems like you need rest, you'll have nightmares looking at mine ;).And all means, I mean no rush. Take any amount you need, its an invitation that doesn't expire. :D kool....... ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 1st pic looks better. 8/10 for the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vang911 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 the first 1 hurts my eyes....ow.. kool card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 hey thanks for rating.....^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 i like second pic and you got a few ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Nice pic, nice effect, 9.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 great picture, good effect 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 alright.... thnx^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Grammar problem, good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Not your best work. Kind of, well, a boring effect to me, and, it has grammar issues, but it's still nice ^_^7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 very interesting card idea... me likey. XD OCG isnt perfect.. but that is okay. ;) 8.9/10 -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Grammar problem' date=' good pic and effect. 8/10[/quote'] Not your best work. Kind of' date=' well, a boring effect to me, and, it has grammar issues, but it's still nice ^_^7/10[/quote'] im not best with English.... for its not my primary language...anywe, thanks for rating it..... and thanks to you too kale... ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 ^ Well, thats ok, English isn't your top language, so I can let some pass, but, just look at other cards here (that are good(like mine(xD))), and learn grammar and OCG from them ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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