Kyub Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 [spoiler=Card Lore]This card cannot be attacked. This card cannot be targeted by Spell and Trap Cards. You can equip this card to a Machine-type monster. While this card is equipped to a monster, treat it as an Equip Spell card. Each turn this card is equipped to a monster, put 1 Production Counter on the equipped monster. For each Production Counter on the equipped monster, increase the equipped monster's ATK by 100. When the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead, and remove all Production Counters placed by this card's effect. Story: It attaches to a robot, produces, making the monster stronger, then is destroyed instead of the monster, dying and destroying all the hard-earned production. I entered it into a contest, and liked it, so I thought I would post it here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 9.8/10 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 amazing!!! the first part also benifits it as a spell by saying this card, not this monster, a work of true art!!! 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Not bad. Good machine support.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 over-powered in the fact that the only way to destroy it is by a monster effect. under-powered in its union effect. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Not bad as a defense on it's own, but there's one error. You don't state when you get a Protection Counter. That's all I can see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Overpowered while a monster, underpowered while an Equip. 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infernape619 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 OMG! It's Wall-E gone evil! Ha ha ha! No, but I like this card, but only 100 increase ATK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Overpowered. I wouldn't use this as a Union, for its Union Equipment ability is pretty much useless. What we have here is a lvl 4, Normal Summon, machine-type with the immunity of an "Exodia Necross"... albeit, that's one heckuva a comparison to make, for there isn't the incredible following legacy and the pwning stat-increasing ability. However, this card is overpowered with its immunity. It's a perfect stall card, and would replace "Marshmallon" and "Spirit Reaper" in the metagame in an instant! Sorry, you can forget about the Union idea. Alone, this card is too strong for its own good. ... But "Cyber Worker WZ-31" sounds very interesting. When I read the name of the thread, I immediately clicked. That name is gold, so I recommend creating a card which matches the name's quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 ...I forgot I posted this thread. Damn, I left out important bits of OCG. I'm an idiot. :(You like the name? It's the name if the picture on DeviantArt. Feel free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Thats pretty good, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Nice card and effect 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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