Bunter Dwayne Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smeg Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Still very unbalenced,Although getting better.Though there are ocg errors!"This card can only be summoned by removing it from play from your hand." It should be; "When this card is drawn you can show it to your opponent to remove it from play. This card cannot be normal summoned." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 levels too high.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted August 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Thanks Norty Nort, have put the ideas of the Dragons into the back of my mind, will change them when I get an idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qwer1234 Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 good card =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 I see OCG errors. The card is broken, too. And pretty unbalanced. But, it's an improvement. Bah, I'll give this a 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 I think it needs a harder Summoning condition.Overused pic too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 unbalanced, 5/10tip: after you make the card, paste the card lore underneath it so its easier to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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