ZanesApprentice Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 image credit goes to spacecoyote of deivientart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 The word, "destroys" is spelled incorrectly, and instead of the word, "battle" I would use the word, "attack". The stats are pretty good, but the picture is slightly overused. Otherwise, great job. :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleevecard Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Some spelling errors (Destroys and again). Pic is overused like glasstin said. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Yummy Little City card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Bad spell and effect, But I don't mind the picture. Because I personally like E-Heroes, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joe123yo Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 lol dude no offence but you have to have proper grammar man... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Verifying...} Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 6/10, Btw: DARK BANE would be dark not light, am i right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayaka Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 some ocg error...but nice pic 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZanesApprentice Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 6/10' date=' Btw: DARK BANE would be dark not light, am i right?[/quote']DARK BANE means he is the bane of darkness I've corrected the spelling, it is problems with my keyboard, i need a new one!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Grammar problem, good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Basic effect, overused pic, and grammar/ocg issues.Thats what people come to expect from a new member. It's still a nice card for a newb, so, congrats ;) 7/10 for new members ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 interesting, i would have liked it better if it were an Ally of Justice monster instead of an Elemental Hero.. Note: Ally of Justice is an OCG archetype that is against DARK and LIGHT monsters in their effects.. i rate this an 8/10 -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 pretty good, its been done before though.8\10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Basic. That much. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Simple & common effect.Ok for a new member I guess.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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