H0micidal WolfMan Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 PIC IS NOT MINE This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot attack unless you tribute 2 monsters that you control that are Beast-Type and DARK attribute. If this card attacks, and it is chained to a trap card, negate the trap card and destroy it, and halve this cards attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Not bad! got some ocg errors which you can fix by reading Dj Osiris's ocg thread but everything else is looking good! 8/10 BTW. You should take out the first bit of the effect, it makes it a bit overpowered:"this card cannot be destroyed by battle." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Some errors but ok.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Very nice card!!! 9/10 Keep up the good work. Just a little bit of OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 What the others said. Im also diggin' that image 9.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 it's pretty hard to find dark beast monsters, but you CAN find them which makes it playable. also the battle immunity is too much for a 4000 atk monster. besides that it deserves 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 not bad 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Some errors.. 7.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Not bad. I see some OCG errors though. The first effect makes it a little OP'ed, too. All in all, good job. ;) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 7/10 okgood picture though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angus0403 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 nice pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 quite a lot OCG errors,but I still get your point here...7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 cool card playable and a cool image 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Ain't bad pretty good 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 ok ocg errors6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 I'll tell you one error: Tribute = Release. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 this is not bad.....maybe just lower the ATK a bit...and fix ocg.....7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 How can a monster itself be chained to a trap card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 How can a monster itself be chained to a trap card? i suppose he/she means when opponent activates a trap to this cards attack.......tho its not a chain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Some OCG errors. And the first effect makes it a bit overpowered. Overall 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espeonature Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 REALLY good. 9.5/10, picture spoils it SLIGHTLY. What's OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 REALLY good. 9.5/10' date=' picture spoils it SLIGHTLY. What's OCG?[/quote'] OCG stands as Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 *sigh*People giving sympathy. Be honest with you...The card pic is meh-ish.OCG...wrong.OFFICIAL CARD GRAMMAR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 hey, it isnt toooooo bad, guys. ;) sure, you could use a scout plane loop to make it attack, but it gets its atk halved if it has a trap chained to it. that means that mirror force would knock him down to 2000. i say that is pretty lol for having to tribute 2 monsters. plus, his ATK doesnt go back up. he stays that way. he is more of a burden.. XD 8/10 good job! -K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H0micidal WolfMan Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 How can a monster itself be chained to a trap card? hey' date=' it isnt toooooo bad, guys. ;) sure, you could use a scout plane loop to make it attack, but it gets its atk halved if it has a trap chained to it. that means that mirror force would knock him down to 2000. i say that is pretty lol for having to tribute 2 monsters. plus, his ATK doesnt go back up. he stays that way. he is more of a burden.. XD 8/10 good job! -K[/quote'] Yea, i wanted him to be that way because i was going to make another card for it called, THE UNBOUND BEHEMOTH, FENRIR!!! but, 1 problem, i cant find any good pics, and i cant upload any of my drawings, so i dont have anything to make him with yet. but i'll make a set out of him. and com' on people, the pic suits him perfectly. at least if u knew ur Norse Mythology. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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