Yu Gi Oh fanfic

[Zayne13]

7:30 am House of Naye Derin, Lilly Derin, and Uncle Max...

Prologue:

(Lilly)Goodmorning Naye.

(Naye) Uh Lilly go away im sleeping.

(Lilly) But if you sleep in you will miss the duel monsters tournament.

(Naye)...CRUD! Your right I gotta go.

Naye Derin is a thirteen year old boy with an intrist is Duel Monsters. He enters a duel monsters tournament with his friends. He hopes to win the grand prize witch is a duel with Yugi Motto the King Of Games, But what he does not know is a mysterios gang of duelists have entered as well.

(Ally) Hey Naye were ya been I was looking everyware.

(Naye) Hey Ally.

(Ally)Oh. have you seen Nate?

(Naye)He just called my sell a minuit ago he needed to do some chores but he should be hear by now.

(Nate)Hey guys sorry I'm late.

(Naye and Ally)Hey Nate.

(Nate)So did you guys here about the new duel system there using in this tournament?

(Naye)Ya. but only a little.

(Ally)New system? You meen there not using duel disks?

(Nate)Nope. Kaiba corp came up with some knew tech.

(Naye)I heard they were called Duel Blasters.

(Nate)Hey Guys were here.

(All)Wow it's huge!

(Naye)Well lets go in!

 

To Be Continued In Yu GI OH Blast

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Hope you like it remember this is the prologue wich is why it's so short.

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Sry Forgot to tell you the 1st part is out tomorow but after that it will be every week.

[Purple Dinosaur]

It's a bit too short.

 

But don't worry. all great fan-fic writers started like this. So as you continue, you'll get ideas on how to improve yourself and it can become very good!

 

-PD

[Silas Angel]

and try to think of a good name.. pretty decent to start with ^_^

[CrabHelmet]

So far, it's ultra-generic.

 

* Kid enters card tournament with friends

* Some sort of evil group is doing unspecified evil stuff

* Title could be used as the title for any YGO fanfic ever written

 

The only way to make it more generic would be to have Dark Magician Girl appear for no reason.