Zayne13 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 (Anouncer)Attention all contestants please come to the Deminstration room to see how the Duel Blaster works.(Naye)Come on guys.(Anouncer)Now please welcome the creator of the duel blasters himself Seto Kaiba!(Kaiba)Hello and welcome to the Blast Tounament. I will be showing you how this machine works. Kaiba puts a black machanic glove around his arm.(Kaiba) To draw press this red button.sudenly five cargs shoot right out of the machine around his rist.(Kaiba)To play a card simply put the chosen card in this slot in the center. Then say Fire! A Blue Eyes White Dragon shot out of the glove.(Kaiba)As you can see this is a hologram completely harmless to people. The rest should be simple enoph to figure out.(Anouncer)Ok with that let the turniment begin!(Ally)Hey guys check out mine i got blue.(Nate)Yellow for me. how bout you Naye?(Naye)Defenetly green.(Ally "dreamily")Just like the color of your eyes!(Naye and Nate)OK?(Dueler)Yo you with the black hair!(Naye)Me?(Dueler)Ya! My names Drato. Lets duel.(Nate)Wow Naye already has a duel.(Drato)How Many points you offer.(Naye)Uh points?(Drato)Yeah that guy Kaiba just said we duel for points.(Naye)He did?(Nate)He wasn't even listening.(Drato)We start out with 1000 pts each we earn pts by winning duels but if we lose our duels we lose our pts. Once our points hit 0 were outget it?(Naye)Yeah I think so soo then 100pts then.(Drato)100pts BLAST!(Drato) 2000LP Ok Ill go first, I play Goon in atk mode 1000atk 1500def(Naye)2000LP Ok then I play Drangon Fang in atk mode 1200atk 1200def. Now Dragon Fang atk.(Drato)Urgg! Naye 2000LP Drato 1800LP(Dratoa)Fine! Draw All right Fearful Widow Blast! 1500 atk 2000 def now atk his dragon!(Naye)Wow! Drato 1800LP Naye 1700LP(Naye)Draw! oh no all i have is Kuribo Knight. Well Def is always good.Kuribo Knight Blast! atk 300 def 2000. Thats it.(Drato)...Hahahaha you are kiddin mey that thing...hahaha draw hmm well Spear Frog blast! 1300 atk 100 def atk(Naye) you didnt check Kuribo knight's def.(drato)Huh...ahhhhhh that to much!Naye 1700LP Drato 1100LP(Naye)Right my turn... cool! DinoVice Blast 1500 atk 1400 def Dirrect atk.(Drato) NO!(Naye) Its Over!(Nate and Ally)Great job.(Drato)Heres your points!(Naye)Great duel.(Drato)Watever!(Nate)Sore loser much?(Naye)Who cares cuz now i got 1100 pts.(Nate)You didnt even know what pts were untle a minuit ago.(All)Hahahaha.(Drato)Boss I faild.(Voice)Unicceptible! Banish Him!(Drato)Please it was only 100 pts! Ahhhhhh!(Voice)Hahahahaha! To Be Continued In Yu Gi Oh BLAST! chapter 2When Kaiba Is talking he says to say fire to sumon a monster that was my mistake it should be blast. SRY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vorrokhero1 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 grammer problems, short, plot boring. idea may be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Sry its not very good but its my first fanfic i hope the next one will be better.Sry to anyone who licked it know more yu gi oh blast at least not these charecters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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