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OLYMPUS 12 GODS; EXPANDED INTO TO BE FINISHED 50 CARD SET!!!! LOOK IN REALISITIC


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Oh, good. It's not the same thread.

This way I look like less of a psycho when I rate the cards:

 

OH! BIG THING BEFOREHAND!!! The Yu-Gi-OH OCG has evolved so that "on your side of the field" is now "you control"... that's not a direct translation, but you have a problem with that in your OCG, which I will make sure to point out at every possible opportunity ^^...

 

"Jupiter" -- Aesthecity, Balance, and OCG perfect

 

"Juno" -- She's got a single problem. You did the "face-up on your field" thing.. the correct writing for the second sentance is "As long as you control this face-up monster, your Hand Limit is 9 cards."

Just fix that and it's good.

 

"Apollo" -- Aesthecity, balance, and OCG perfect (again ^^)

 

"Ceres" -- There needs to be a comma after "Once per turn", but you're fine balance-wise and aesthecity-wise... no one will really notice a missing comma anyway :)

 

"Diana" -- Beautiful, smooth, overall wonderful. I think, if you want, you can up her ATK to 2100 now... oh, and either her or "Ceres" should be a Normal Monster... can't have a full set of secret rares and Ultimates.

 

"Mars" -- this guy's due for a rewrite.

I added a few things, but most of the card is the same. I still think "Mars" is borderline overpowered with his second effect in use... hmmm. He needs another kind of payment method... got it. Tell me if you like the idea, it's added and bolded:

As long as you control this face-up monster' date=' each time your opponent deals more than 1000 damage to your Life Points with 1 card, you may double the amount of Life Points lost from that 1 card and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type Monster from your Graveyard is face-up Attack Position.[/quote']

 

"Mercury" -- Balance and OCG perfect. Just make him a Normal Monster.

 

"Neptune" -- remember, it's "any Fish-Type Monster you control". Balance and aesthecity are perfect.

 

"Minerva" -- again, "As long as you control this face-up Attack Position monster", but balance and aesthecity are perfect.

 

"Vulcan" -- OCG, balance, and aesthecity perfect.

 

"Venus" -- She's perfect, just something about her feels off. Maybe there's some strategy I'm not thinking about... hmmm, oh well. For now let's say OCG, aesthecity, and balance(?) perfect.

 

"Vesta" -- it's "Set Spell & Trap Cards you control", and the picture looks kind of strange (I recommend using the first one). However, her balance is perfect.

 

Nice job with the remakes of these guys! You'll become a first-rate cardmaker yet!:mrgreen:

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