Apophis, The Sun Eater (Rate)

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Here it is, rate please, Fixed the small ocg errors.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Light and 2 Dark monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster, you lose 1000 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may pay 2000 Life Points to negate the effect of a Trap Card. When this card is destroyed as a result of Spell or Trap cards effect, do one of the following:

•Pay 3000 Life Points to destroy all monsters on the Field.

•Pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all Trap and Spell cards on the field.

•Pay 5000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field.

•Discard your complete hand, gain 1500 Life Points and draw 2 cards.

•Pay 1000 Life Points and Special Summon 1 LVL 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster.

•Remove the top half of your deck from play, then gain 5000 Life Points.

[~The Red Crusader~]

10/10. No comment.

[Silencerleader]

Overused pic/10

[Kale]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Light and 2 Dark monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster' date=' you lose 1000 Life Points[/b']. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may pay 2000 Life Points to negate the effect of a Trap Card. When this card is destroyed as a result of Spell or Trap cards effect, do one of the following:

•Pay 3000 Life Points to destroy all monsters on the Field.

•Pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all Trap and Spell cards on the field.

•Pay 5000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field.

•Discard your complete hand, gain 1500 Life Points and draw 2 cards.

•Pay 1000 Life Points and Special Summon 1 LVL 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster. [from where?]

•Remove the top half of your deck from play, then gain 5000 Life Points.

 

alright, questions and OCG fixes up there ^

 

now, this card is supremely overpowered.

 

you could have 2 cards left in your deck, then remove the top one to gain 5000 Life Points. that is ridiculous.

 

you could have 1 card in your hand, so you could discard it to gain two more, then 1500 life points. that too is ridiculous.

 

it may be hard to summon, but you are dueling with too many life points to use and gain.

 

6/10

 

~K

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Light and 2 Dark monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster' date=' you lose 1000 Life Points[/b']. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may pay 2000 Life Points to negate the effect of a Trap Card. When this card is destroyed as a result of Spell or Trap cards effect, do one of the following:

•Pay 3000 Life Points to destroy all monsters on the Field.

•Pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all Trap and Spell cards on the field.

•Pay 5000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field.

•Discard your complete hand, gain 1500 Life Points and draw 2 cards.

•Pay 1000 Life Points and Special Summon 1 LVL 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster. [from where?]

•Remove the top half of your deck from play, then gain 5000 Life Points.

 

alright, questions and OCG fixes up there ^

 

now, this card is supremely overpowered.

 

you could have 2 cards left in your deck, then remove the top one to gain 5000 Life Points. that is ridiculous.

 

you could have 1 card in your hand, so you could discard it to gain two more, then 1500 life points. that too is ridiculous.

 

it may be hard to summon, but you are dueling with too many life points to use and gain.

 

6/10

 

~K

 

Thank you for the fixes, its supposed to be risky to play.

[Kale]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Light and 2 Dark monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster' date=' you lose 1000 Life Points[/b']. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may pay 2000 Life Points to negate the effect of a Trap Card. When this card is destroyed as a result of Spell or Trap cards effect, do one of the following:

•Pay 3000 Life Points to destroy all monsters on the Field.

•Pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all Trap and Spell cards on the field.

•Pay 5000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field.

•Discard your complete hand, gain 1500 Life Points and draw 2 cards.

•Pay 1000 Life Points and Special Summon 1 LVL 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster. [from where?]

•Remove the top half of your deck from play, then gain 5000 Life Points.

 

alright, questions and OCG fixes up there ^

 

now, this card is supremely overpowered.

 

you could have 2 cards left in your deck, then remove the top one to gain 5000 Life Points. that is ridiculous.

 

you could have 1 card in your hand, so you could discard it to gain two more, then 1500 life points. that too is ridiculous.

 

it may be hard to summon, but you are dueling with too many life points to use and gain.

 

6/10

 

~K

 

Thank you for the fixes, its supposed to be risky to play.

 

well, you succeeded. ^_^

 

it is just too risky.

 

i would lower the life point costs and gains. it would make it more realistic. ;)

[OMGAKITTY]

That font is ridiculously small.

[shonenhikada]

3/10 pic and effect overused.

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3/10 pic and effect overused.

 

effect overused?? explain that

[Atomix]

Overused Pic, nice effect though.

[Spire]

The pic is overused, not bad though.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

A lot of effects involving life point payment...

[Lazer Yoshi]

Effect rocks dude :D The pic is OK, but a little used :P 9.2/10

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Effect rocks dude :D The pic is OK' date=' but a little used :P 9.2/10

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Well i know the pic is overused, just couldn't find anything that would fit the name or effect besides it, trust me i looked