asterr259 Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 In my cards u may have noticed "XLR edition" in the circulation part, well XLR was my yugioh comic so now i've turned it into fan fic, enjoy.PROLOGUE:Announcer- Today we start the first ever "BATTLE FOREST TORNAMENT", now here are the rules:1) Anyone can challange anyone.2) Anyone who loses is out of the tornament.3) The last person still in the tornament is the winner.Announcer- So in short, the objective is to hunt down duelists and disqualify them and to stay away from body.Yamato- Hmmmmm.Announcer- When I say go everybody must find some to duel. Announcer- 1....2...3..DUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yamato- I'm outta here,...suckers!*Yamato ran deep into the forest for an hour straight*Yamato- Ok, thats enough running! CHAPTER 1(The Data Hero):Yamato- Ok, ready to duel!Yamato- Hahahahaha, ok i sounded funny when I said that, and why am I talking to myself?*rustling in the bushes*Yamato- I can hear you there, I challenge you to a duel!???- Fine I accept, lets go!!!*DUEL*Yamato- I'll draw, I summon Data hero alpha:Yamato- And now I activate Upgrade:Yamato- It allows me to level up my monster by adding "LV" to its name.Yamato- I summon Data hero alpha LV5:???- Not bad.???- I summon Death blade:???- I end my turnYamato- I summon Data hero alpha LV7:Yamato- Attack!*D-HERO Alpha attacks**???(LP-2100)*???- Guess what....???- He had a special effect!*D-HERO Alpha explodes*TO BE CONTINUED...---------------------------------------------------------------------to see what Yamato, the main character looks likes click the link belowhttp://www.gaiaonline.com/badge/15085106/?_gaia_mkt_=410 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its interesting... When are you posting the next one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 A.S.A.P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its not that good. It needs more detail. Check out my fanfic, yugioh legacy of the shadow lord Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Way too short. Needs a lot more detail and effort put in, i'm afraid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 Cool I like It. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 ok heres a better image of yamato, dont worry about the firsy one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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