Jackofcards Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Hey guys this is my first card tell me what you think This is the revised edition, also DeMeNTed i know demon isnt a type i was just posting this as a test. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatchetman_354 Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 wow for a first card this is just great seeing that it is a high level your gonna draw a lot of cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infernape619 Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 This is great for a first card. I love the pic and the effect. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackofcards Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Thanks i was a little worried the OCG would be bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevie58 Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 10/10 great for first card this is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 bad name bad pic WAY OVERPOWERED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 A bit overpowered. Lower it's ATK and DEF a bit, or put in the effect that you can draw equal of the half of the Level of the monster that destroyed it. Not bad for you're first card. I can tell you, that my first card wasn't that creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 How do you post cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 You may end up sending some good cards to the Graveyard as a result of the effect. Nice job for your first, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackofcards Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Thanks for the suggestions guys i might lower its ATK to 2100 and its DEF to 1300 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Use Fiend instead of Demon as the type. Demon is a fake type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 This is a really good card...well, it's better than mine :-) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viper49 Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Hey guys this is my first card tell me what you think This is the revised edition' date=' also DeMeNTed i know demon isnt a type i was just posting this as a test.[/quote'] Dude that card was awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 i don't like the name and it isn't a great card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 :shock:I was looking at the one not edited and thinking "OVERPOWERED!" :? But i looked down and saw the edited one :) nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 -OCG needs work.-Good pic.-Overpowered. Spire's Rating: 6.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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