Zeroshot Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Haven't made a card in awhile. Bored to death. Random Evolution Structure Deck Mobius the Moon Spirit-EN001 1 Tuner Monster+1 or more WATER non-Tuner MonstersDuring each of you Battle Phases, instead of attacking, you can pay 200 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If "Mobius the Frost Monarch" was used to Synchro Summon this card, you can return 2 Spell or Trap Cards from your Graveyard to your hand. Fallen Soul Shower-EN002 More to add later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 From What I've Learned:Fiend's Chance:OCG ErrorsMobius the Moon Spirit's Second Effect can't be used because Mobius is a level 6 Moisnter and the Tuner Monster and The Non Tuner Monsters' Must Equal the Synchro's Level.So Either Raise His Level or Remove his Second Effect.But Good Start on the structure Deck. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 First is good, but Mobius has 2 mistakes. You put "instead attacking" in first line when you had to put "instead of attacking". And also, you can't Synchro Summon that card with Mobius because it's level makes it overlap the 5 stars. 8/10 Off-topic to inferno: You stole that avatar from my sig! Lol jk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 good start but i suggest raise its level by 18/10 for your cardkeep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted August 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 From What I've Learned:Fiend's Chance:OCG ErrorsMobius the Moon Spirit's Second Effect can't be used because Mobius is a level 6 Moisnter and the Tuner Monster and The Non Tuner Monsters' Must Equal the Synchro's Level.So Either Raise His Level or Remove his Second Effect.But Good Start on the structure Deck. 7/10 Bolded and crossed out=pointless and un-needed. If your going to help with OCG, name the mistake. Otherwise it is pointless and basicly spam. Other: Helpfull and fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Also, on Fiends Chance, it's Fiend's not Fiends Chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 zeroshot, i dont like to be referred as Other. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 @Above:Sorry but I still am trying to learn my OCG,but by what I've seen it looked like it had some,again Sorry.@Theodore214:Didn't notice that in your Sig,found mine while roaming Google Images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted August 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 zeroshot' date=' i dont like to be referred as Other. -_-[/quote'] I wasn't referring to you as Other. I was referring to Infernalheroe's information on Synchro Summon as Other. and BTW, Thnx for spammin in my thread :D EDIT: blazenz: Yayz, more pointless messages! My thread should be "Spam Fest" instead of card showcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Awesome pic!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Your a little rusty, but when you get back in the groove this will get better.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Not bad so far. ^_^8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Nice card, well-balanced and aesthetic with good OCG. However, your Set ID is off. If the card is in a structure deck, then it needs to have a set ID of "SD# - EN###". You know that well enough. For now, that's the only problem! Keep up the good work! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 I have a good feeling from this set so far,keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 i like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Good start, keep it up, 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 awsome, awsome to the max 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smeg Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Cool i love mobius and the pic really suits the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Thanks everyone.New card AddedFallen Soul ShowerMeteor showerMeteor-Zombie souls=Fallen Soul Shower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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