DarkForce™ Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 People Helping in my fan-fic: Vorrokhero1, Felgrand the Dominator, and Ruinmode Good Guys: Romeo "Ray" VioletAge: 17Appearence: Brown hair, blue eyes, always wearing a white shirt, a leather jacket, blue pants, and green/blue shoes.Deck: Nova AvengerFavourite Card: Light AvengerTrump Card: Nova Angel - RomeoBio: One day a 6 year old Romeo was left in the middle of nowhere with only one bag full of food/water, and another with his dueling deck and clothes. While walking alone one morning, Romeo saw something that he swore was a duel monster but was convinced that it was a mirage. That night he was awakened by a rustling in the bushes near him, he stood up and walked over to the bushes. He then found and stayed with forever the duel monster spirit "Nova Commander". He now resides with his girlfriend Julie. Julie KorabukaAge: 17Appearence: Blonde hair, green eyes, always wearing a white shirt, a blue miniskirt, and blood red shoes.Deck: ConstellationFavourite Card: Star Beast - GeminiTrump Card: Star Beast - JulietBio: No known tradegies. Best friend to Kayla Alexander III, and girlfriend to Romeo Violet. Her duel spirit is the same as her favourite card, Gemini. Kayla Alexander IIIAge: 15Appearence: Brown hair, blue eyes, always wearing a red shirt, white pants, and white shoes.Deck: Random FateFavourite Card: NoneTrump Card: NoneBio: She acts older than her age, and never really wins a duel. Her deck consists of a bunch of random cards. Her best friend is Julie Korabuka and her older brother is Alexander Hinton. Her mom died when she was 12 and her father married superstar Jackie Corallis Hendrick Hinton III. Alexander HintonAge: 17Appearence: Red/brown hair, blue/green eyes, always wearing a green shirt, a leather jacket, gray pants, and silver sandals.Deck: Relaxation BeatdownFavourite Card: Kora Kora BeastTrump Card: Kora Kora AngelBio: Son to superstar Jackie Corallis Hendrick Hinton III. He never gets mad and always tries to keep his friends and family happy. His duel spirit "Kora Kora" is actually his dead fathers spirit transformed into a duel monster. Rykou DuoAge: 17Appearence: Blonde hair, one red and one blue eye, always wearing a half red/ half blue shirt, gray pants, and red/blue shoes.Deck: Lava to the AquaFavourite Card: Lava FiendTrump Card: Aqua FairyBio: A reckless child. He was found by Jack Hinton and was raised secretly from the rest of his "family" by Jack. During his life he began to develop M.P.D (Multiple Personality Disorder), wich led to kids his own age becoming his friends and then becoming scared of him because of his "other" side. His greatest friend and rival is Romeo Violet. Jack NickelsonAge: 23Appearence: Pale skin, never takes off his black robe.Deck: NoneFavourite Card: NoneTrump Card: NoneBio: Nothing is known about Jack, except that he is a great mindreader and telepathist.*********************************************************************************************Bad Guys: The Great OneAge: UnknownAppearence: Noone has seen him so noone knows what he looks like.Deck: The Great DeckFavourite Card: NoneTrump Card: The Great OneBio: Nothing is known about him. Vast telepathic powers. The DecieverAge: UnknownAppearence: A shadow with no actual form. He can take any form he wants and can stay in that form as long as he wantsDeck: NoneFavourite Card: NoneTrump Card: NoneBio: One day he showed up at The Great One's temple and he took him in as his own, other than that nothing is known. The FollowersAppearence: Since there are thousands of members each one looks different. But you can tell wich one is a memeber by the sign of The Great One on there forehead, a single circle with thousands of lines in it.Decks: Thousands of different ones.Bio: Thousands of people worldwide being controlled by The Great One.*********************************************************************************************Prolouge: 1. Everyone knows the story of Yugi Moto, and Jaden Yuki.2. Everyone knows the story of the Egyptian God Cards, and the Sacred Beasts.3. Everyone knows of the Seven Millenium Items, and Seven Sprirt Keys.4. Everyone knows the story of Pegasus, Marik, Dartz, Noah, Gozaburo, and Sartorius, and Yubel.But now...1. Meet Romeo Violet and The Duel Crew.2. The 3 Future Visionaries3. The 6 Cyber Items4. The Great One, The Dieciever, and The Followers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vorrokhero1 Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 You copied some of my characters from my fan fic! at least a couple. Theres no plot and storyline... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vorrokhero1 Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 idk, I have The Grat One as a bad guy in my fanfic, same appearence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted August 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 Sorry about that and I read your fan-fic nice job! Say can you help me in mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vorrokhero1 Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 sure! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Wow characters are looking good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Good organisation and interesting characters. I await Chapter 1 where I can judge the FanFic =] [ - D - ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Chapter 1 - Let The Tourney Begin! Setting: A simple 5 story apartment building in Neosha. Neosha: A land that was discovered and named after Proffeser Thelonius Viperium. The longest living member of the Viper legacy. ???: Romeo, Romeo, ROMEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Suddenly a teenage boy sat up startled by his girlfriend in his room. Romeo: Julie, what are you doing in my room? Julie: I just came to tell you that the Neosha Cyber Tourney began today and that signups were almost over!!! Romeo shocked and angered that his girlfriend would wait this long to tell him, stood up, got dressed, and grabbing his dueling gear ran out of his house, got on his NM3-C* (Neosha Model 3 - Cycle) and rode off into town.******************************************************Setting: Neosha Grand Village Upon arriving at the signup desk for the tourney Romeo saw his friend Rykou Duo standing near the counter. Romeo: Yo, What's up Rykou? Rykou: Nothin much. Say, are you signing up for the tourney? Romeo: Yeah, Why? Rykou: Because I am, too. Romeo: Great! Nothing like a little friendly competition, huh? Rykou: Nothin like it, Ray. Here, let me run you through the steps to registering in the tourney. Romeo: Okay. Romeo grabs a signup sheet and a pen and starts writing. Rykou: Okay, Step 1: Name, write down what your opponents should call you. Write either Ray or Romeo.Step 2: Team, here you pick between Cyber 1 or Cyber 2. This just lets the commisioner know when you are dueling and for what side. I picked Cyber 2, so you should pick Cyber 1.Step 3: Deck List, Just write down the cards in your deck.Step 4: Sign it with your signature. Now drop it in the box and lets go to the opening ceremony.******************************************************Setting: Inside the Neosha Dome, thousands of elated citizens wait in their seats for the first match-up. Romeo: Hey Rykou, let's go sit with the rest of the Duel Crew. Rykou: Sure! The duo sat next to their friends Julie, Kayla, and Alexander in the V.I.P section. Their friends Alexander and Kayla are related to the hottest celebrity in showbiz, Jackie Corallis Hendrick Hinton III. Romeo sat next to Julie and Rykou sat next to Romeo, just as Commisioner James Jackson walked into the middle of the Duel Arena. Commisioner James: DUELING FANS, ARE YOU READY TO DUEL?????? The crowd roared the answers, "Yes", "Yeah", and "Booyah". Commisioner James: I CAN'T HEAR YOU? The crowd roared the answers, "Yes", "Yeah", and "Booyah" louder than a screeching banshee. Commisioner James: THAT'S MORE LIKE IT. NOW LET'S GET TO THE MATCH. On the blue side representing Team Cyber 1 is Romeo Violet!!!! The crowd roared as Romeo approached his side of the dueling arena. Commisioner James: And his opponent... Oh my, that can't be right. A cloaked man walked up to Commisioner James and said something to him and then walked over to the other side of the dueling arena. Commisioner James: Well then, And his opponent... The Leading Champ in this Tourney for 27 years... JACK NICKELSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack: Romeo, Romeo where art thow Romeo? Ah, there you are and now let us begin... As Jack finished talking a 3 headed beast with 20 arms and 6 legs appeared behind him and let out a piercing scream that only Romeo seemed to hear. Romeo just smiled as a shimmering golden gladiator appeared at his side. These two beast were none other than "Nova Commander" Romeo's duel spirit and "Howling Fiend" Jack's duel spirit.******************************************************1. Duel Spirits can only be seen by others who have them, so only a few members in the crowd could see the two behemoths. 2. The Neosha Model 3 - Cycle was created specifically for the Duel Crew. They were created by Romeo's and Rykou's father. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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