Zayne13 Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Characters:Name: Ray TakadaAge: 15Likes: Duel Monsters, Video GamesHopes: To attend Duel Academy, To become King of gamesFavorite Card:Name: Suku HattakiAge: 15Likes: Duel Monsters, his younger sisterHopes: To become king of games, for an antibiotic to come out that will heel his sister of her illnessFavorite Card: Name: Jullie TeulsAge: 15Likes: Ray, Duel MonsterHopes: To date RayFavorite Card:Name: Emilly HattakiAge: 13Likes: Duel MonstersHopes: To be cured of her illnessFavorite Card:Name: Hiro TakadaAge: 13Likes: Emilly, Duel MonstersHopes: not decidedFavorite Card: Ray- Yawn! Hiro- So your finaly awake. Ray- Oh hey Hiro...What's up? Hiro- Jullie called! Ray- (blushes) Get out of my room! (he throws his pillow at hiro) (ray gets dressed and calls Jullie) Ray- Hi Jullie. Jullie- Hey ray. Ray- Hiro said you called. Jullie- (surprised) No i didn't call! Ray- Oh... could you hang on a sec (he puts down the phone)...YOU LITTLE BASTERED! Hiro- hahahahahahaha! Ray- That's it you little... Jullie- Hello... Ray are you there? Ray- ... (screams) Jullie! (hurrys and picks up the phone) Jullie- Your back. Well anyway did you here about this cool Duel Monsters tournament? Ray- Tournament? Jullie- Oh come on it's all over the news i'ts being held by Yugi Motto the king of games. Ray- No way Jullie- Grand prize is 500,000,000 dollars! Ray- Wow! So why are we talking about this? Jullie- Because yours trully is going to enter! Ray-...h...h...Hahahahahaha Jullie- Why are you laughing? Ray- You can't be serious. Jullie- Actually I was! (hangs up phone) Ray- Jullie wait...(walks to chair and sits down) heh! Hiro- Little trouble with your girlfriend. Ray- funk off! Dad- Watch your mouth! Ray- Sorry dad (leans over and falls of chare) Hiro- Haha Ray- Go to hell. (looks at clock) Oh crap we gotta go! (Ray and hiro run out the door and head for school along the way they see ther friend Saku) Ray, and Hiro- Hey Saku. Saku- (seriously) Hey Ray- What's wrong Saku- I need to get into college. Ray- Uh were 15 we don't need to think about college yet, besides your like the smartest kid in the school. Saku- (screams) College costs money wich I don't have! I need to become a docter. Hiro- Oh yeah for your sister right? Saku- Right. Im thinking about entering that duel monsters contest. Ray- You too? Saku- Who else is? Ray- Jullie. Saku- Your kidding right. Ray- That was my reaction. So you think your good enough. Saku- Maybe. Ray- Well Let's find out i challenge you to a duel! To be continued Chapter 1 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-64187.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 lol, pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Err............. it's o.k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 sory type o ninja with kuni's effect should say "When this card destroys a monster that monster is removed from play" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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