kiaer corp Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 [attachment=4011]this is my first try at making a card so plz be kind thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 You forgot the type!!!!!!!!!!!!! Warrior ninja what!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kronoskopykat Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 It's a fairly decent card, just a few issues. 1. The card needs a type. By the looks of it, Natoma would be either a Warrior, Fiend, or Zombie. 2. You have some grammar problems. Mainly just capitalizing and punctuation. Fix those two errors and your card will look nice and professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giga Bowser X Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 Yeah, what kronoskopykat said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MachineHunter Posted August 9, 2007 Report Share Posted August 9, 2007 Missing a type and grammar problems,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonathanSpenc Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 coool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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