Distant Worlds

[RickiMinaj]

[align=center]I feel my sorrow weighing down your shoulders

as you feel yours on mine

 

Distance was the cause of the sorrow

for me and you cannot be

 

Even though love has bonds of infinite ties

we could not get ours to tie

 

And as our love oh so grows

we split oh so apart

 

Though i cannot bare the pain we feel

for not only me, but you too

 

I shall stand my proud world

and spread the love me and you felt

 

Across my distant world

as you spread it across yours

 

To tie our distant Planets together

for eternity and beyond[/align]

[Dad]

Wow. That was. . . beautiful. Almost brought a tear to my eye.

 

*standing ovation*

 

~Ken-chan

[RickiMinaj]

thnx ken chan.

but lately, it sees like youve been sucking up to my work. If you dont like it, say so, it won make me feel bad. Dont worry ^_^

[Dad]

Sucking up? If I was sucking up you'd know. ANd don't worry, I honestly do enjoy all of your work. Icy-dono's gonna get you tho, seeing as how I'm fan's of both you and his poems.

 

~Ken-chan

[Guest JoshIcy]

Even though love has bonds of infinite ties

we could not get ours to knot

 

That would be my only fix :/ and your style is odd for me lol.

Nice try though ^_^ Try more fluidity instead of being direct maybe?

Its always nice to have someone to say something other than its nice right ;)

[RickiMinaj]

Even though love has bonds of infinite ties

we could not get ours to knot

 

That would be my only fix :/ and your style is odd for me lol.

Nice try though ^_^ Try more fluidity instead of being direct maybe?

Its always nice to have someone to say something other than its nice right ;)

 

Thank you icy doni. Yea, i had a problem with thinking of other words. BTW, i know what not meens. That meens dont do. but does not and knot meen the same thing?

[Dad]

Even though love has bonds of infinite ties

we could not get ours to knot

 

That would be my only fix :/ and your style is odd for me lol.

Nice try though ^_^ Try more fluidity instead of being direct maybe?

Its always nice to have someone to say something other than its nice right ;)

 

Thank you Icy dono. Yea' date=' [b']I[/b] had a problem with thinking of other words. BTW, I know what not means. That means don't do; but do not and knot mean the same thing?

 

 

Fix'd

 

^_^

 

And no, they don't. -.-"

 

~Ken-chan

[Guest JoshIcy]

Knot is like when you tie something lol

Not is a negative something..