Xymma Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 My first card essence of fear, i may make a set for it but might notfix'dnot sure need more opinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 Sacrificing for the Summon should be Tributing, as for life points, it's paying. And it should say "take control of 1 "Fear" monster your opponent controls." Are you using Spirit as a sub-type or its actual type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 I'm pretty sure Spirit is a real sub-type. Spirit-type doesn't need quotations around it. I don't think its overpowered.... And since this is your first card, after you change those OCG errors ShadowKyogre mentioned, I'd give it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xymma Posted August 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 i made it for the type. deity said make it fiend / spiritidkim changing it now tributing isnt a word......tribute is but not tributing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 Well...whoops... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 not bad dude, needs some work here and there i would think of increasing the atk to 1800.change the type to Fiend with sub-type of spirit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 -Good OCG.-Ok pic. Spire's Rating: 8.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 I agree with Axle. Make Spirit the sub-type and put iin the spirit effect.An ok idea to me. Cool pic. ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vang911 Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 kool card, nice pic., OCG errors though, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 OCG is a little off, but the problems are mentioned above. Pic is freaky and shocking, and I like it. Effect seems balanced and effective (some what). Card Rating: 7/10 - nice try for your first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 cool card, nice pic and solid OCGgrade B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wielder of the Ankh Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 This is what I would make of it.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1, Level 4 or lower, Spirit-Type monster you control. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to take control of 1 "Fear" monster your opponent controls, until the End Phase of your next turn. Also, all Spirit-subtypes must return to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn they are Summoned. So IMO keep it Spirit/Effect unless you want to add that effect in. great pic, strange effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 Good OCG! I don't like the pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 pretty good for new mem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 Tributing 1 Level 4 or lower, good pic, change ATK to 2200, level to 6. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 Tributing 1 Level 4 or lower' date=' good pic, change ATK to 2200, level to 6. 7/10[/quote']Tributing isn't a word dude, you really think that words for Official Card Grammar??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xymma Posted August 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 k thx ill change the ATK but seeing as u and Professor Cobra both posted me ill put it in between Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 the card needs some work and have some OCG errors, but is ok. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GordieKat Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 Thats INCREDIBLE for a newbie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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