staticrevenger Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 2 new cards added :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Happy late birthday.. *ahem*.. Tausif. ^^ Anyway, back to work.. your deck is bad. I'm sorry to admit it, but there's no strategy. You should be able to see that all decks have a strategy. "E-hero" monsters are all about the Fusion Summons, just like "Cyber" Monsters. "Gladiator Beast" Monsters are made for switching out, "Six Samurai" Monsters are for multiple fast Summons, etc. Your set needs a set strategy, which it currently doesn't have. All of your cards deal with different tactics. Some or aggro, while others are Summoning and field control. Create either a strategy that all the cards follow, or a strategic base that all the cards work around (like the "Monarch" deck is very much rfp-oriented, and the Warrior-Type Deck had a strategy of aggro via equip. The Zombie-Type deck is all about Zombie-Type Monsters, but not only that, Zombie-Type Monsters that get Summoned qiuckly). So find a base, a mainstream strategy, or both. Currently your deck has neither. And, by the way, I don't mean to offend, but your cards seem like a combination of "E-heroes" and Dragon-Type Monsters. That isn't very original, is it? "Endtech" sounds awesome and everything, but idea of "Endtech" Monsters themselves... well, that leaves something to be desired.^^ Work on a new kind of strategy, like one not in any structure decks yet. (Effect-driven aggro taken, equip aggro taken, multi-summon taken, field control and burn both taken, battle stall taken, S&T focus play taken, rfp strategy taken, Synchro soon-to-be-taken... jeez, there's not much left. ^^) You dropped the idea of Corruption Monsters right after that contest... it makes me sad. I thought your booster, or or deck would be about (or at least include) Corruption Monsters as a new strategy. Wouldn't that be awesome?? ^^ For the first time in the metagame, the Trump card could have a lower level than 6... or there could be more than one Trump (like, 3 different deck boxes, each sporting a different trump card. ^^). Anyway, that's my idea. I hope you take it into consideration! :mrgreen: This would work in a fan-fic, for a character that appears once and then doesn't come back. You can't give the main character a deck like this, with no apparent strategy. Sorry ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Ahh, I guess you are right. This will just have to be a set then. And I will make a Corruption set after this, I just wanted to wait until my ocg improved :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 cool 10/10 and happy late birthday wow that was late Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Nice cards. I like the theme and you have made the first Flip effect dragon card. (At least so i have seen). You have some OCG errors however. O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king shoeface Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Man I love these cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 4 new monsters added :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Predator_1 Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 WOW WOW WOW, much effort, nice pictures, good ocg ! 95 / 100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadiz Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 I like the cards but I used some of those pics in my threads...and some of them are overused9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Ok, there are alot of minor errors on your cards, you constantly forget to use commas, and you forget to "" things like token names. Also, some effects are a lil strong, but are still good. I know this isn't the kind of big help post you wanted, but, it's too much work for me to write down the effects for all the cards and fix them all up. But I did at least show you a few ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 WOW nice cards! stunning. 10/10. but some of the cards pics r overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 nicely done. i like them. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 these r awesome but overused pics 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smeg Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 Hey ruinmode, the second card i way to good you summon first turn and BAM! Also there are a few rares, with structure decks they only have one except for the new one but there were a few normal rares in there.Norty Nort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 I've used all those pictures! XDPretty good, original ^_^ 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 Ruinmode, I have edited your tittle, becuase it is against the rules to bribe members to post. Do it again, and your thread will be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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