RayCards Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 These monsters are paladins, with effects that are most appropriate to their respective element. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 1st Card: this card is kinda overpowerdAs long as this card remains face-up on the field, all FIRE monsters you control, cannot be destroyed. Inflict 500 points of Damage to your opponent's Life Points at the end of this turn.I changed some stuff but it's still overpowered try to fix that 2nd Card:it's the same, it should be WATER, and just read the 1st Card 3rd Card:it's WIND, End Phase, field is not caps check the 1st Card again ^ 4th Card:it's EARTH and its Level and you know everything else.... 5th Card:it's DARK, and Phases is also caps, and Life Points.... 6th Card:it's Tributing not sacrificing, remember all Attributes are all Capped (WIND, WATER....)Summoned, Phases are capped and field is not capped. Hope These Help ^:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayCards Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Thx for the advice, i'll get on to changing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Meh.. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonxxTamer Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Lol, Paladin of Air is like, "I believe I can fly" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayCards Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 OK, changes have been made. Anything else wrong Silent Hunter?Oh yeah, and thx again for the OCG tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 You forgot to change Summon in your last cardYour 1st sentences of the 6 cards have problem but their ok :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 I like the first 3 pics. The cards are very good and nicely balanced. All in all a very good effort! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 The OCG is o.k, and the pics are meh.grade C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 seen the pic of paladin of air dozens of timesother pics are meh/bland/boringtry to improve ocg by caps and spelling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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