Dark Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Somewhat realistic. I can see in the future something like this card would exsist. Hey, maybe there is already a card like this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 the picture is mehtry to improve ocg by caps and spelling7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 OCG FIX:"Decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 1000. If the equipped monster was a Dragon-Type, it can attack your oppontent's Life Points directly. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type monster from your hand and add 1 "Dragon Orb" Spell Card to your hand."it's Dragon-Type and i fixed the 1st sentence, it's not sacrifice its Tribute, you dont need to say Graveyard cause i stated it in the fix. So Hope these Help ^^^:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Not bad, the effect is balanced becasue of how the Attack is decreased. The picture needs a background, and there is a couple OCG errors. DRAGON should be Dragon-Type Last sentence should be something like: If this card is destroyed, you can discard one Dragon-Type monster to return this card to your hand. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vang911 Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 the pic. ain't too good(i know its just an orb, but u can do better), OCG isn't good,6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H0micidal WolfMan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 i think its a little op'ed, cuz if its equipped to a high level dragon, its a 1 turn free KO possible attack to ur opponent. i think it should come with more of a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sword of Oblivion Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 There have been other cards like it, and there's no reason to lower defense for it. Underpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Graveyard, grammar problems, okay pic, needs background. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Fine... 7/10. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sushisush5 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 It's Dragon-type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 Get a BG for the pic & use Silent Hunter's OCG fixes and this card will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flamaru Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 pic is too simple, but a good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuroKibo Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 DRAGON should be Dragon-Typeand the last sentence should read:"If this card is destroyed, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to the Graveyard to add 1 "Dragon Orb" from your Graveyard to your hand."and maybe also follow Silent Hunter's OCG Fix guidelines, and it would be better.I know the pic is an orb, but it's so simple, try to add backgrounds like liquid or somethin'.I don't mind the effect, but I think it's balanced.Overall, 6.98/10~Pac-Man's Cousin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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