Yu Gi Oh Scars of the Dark Duelist.

[Zayne13]

I just don't give up do I, You can tell me my fanfics suck but guess what I do...RIGHT A NEW ONE YOU JERKS. Please comment and rate.

 

Prouloge:

 

Dark Duelist: (draws) "I summon Malkarie Knight in attack mode."

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Duelist: "Oh no!"

 

Dark Duelist: "Now attack and send him to oblivia!"

 

Duelist: "Please stop your attack!"

 

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Duelist: "Ahhhhhhhhh"...

 

Zayne: "Ahhhhhhhhh"...

 

Haley: Zayne please wake up.

 

Zayne: "Urg... Haley?"

 

Haley: "Oh thank god your alright big brother."

 

Zayne: (Yawn) "It was just a nightmare no need to worry."

 

Haley: "You have been having alot of nightmares lightly."

 

Zayne: "Yah" (looks at clock) "Only two o'clock. You better go back to sleep."

 

Haley: "Ok night Zayne."

 

Zayne: (thinks to self) "If only it were just a dream."

 

(twenty-five minuits later)

 

Zayne: "Better get going." (zayne puts on a black robe and mask.)

 

Dark Duelest: "All right...Lets Go!"

 

To be continued in Scars of the Dark Duelist Episode 1

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Click to see Zayne(Dark Duelist Form)

[Corporal]

I'm hating just about everything about this.

[Zayne13]

Please be nice :(

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If you don't like it please tell me what i can do to improve

[asterr259]

its cool but make it lllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggger

[Corporal]

Please be nice :(

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If you don't like it please tell me what i can do to improve

 

I think my post suggested what needed improvement. Everything.