Phanax Leminer Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 I got no idea if the dragon cards are overused or something, but here.All theses cards have the name "Order Dragon". Their individual name are in Japanese. Thank you internet! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 some good picstry and improve minor ocg errors such as caps and spelling7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 7.9999999999999995543453855645359456395634953495634/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 some good picstry and improve minor ocg errors such as caps and spelling7.5/10 Gonna try! :37.9999999999999995543453855645359456395634953495634/10 Wow, that's sure is... exact. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 1st pic is overused, take out the border of your last picFix:1st Card:Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent's Life Points.Tribute is caps, on your side of the field is outdated it's "you control" noe, Damage is caps and they can all fit 1 sentence, opponent's has ' 2nd Card: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Dragon-Type monsters gain 500 ATK during the Battle Phase.you forgot remains (it maybe needed), they can fit 1 sentence, no need of "your" 3rd card: This card can only be Special Summoned by sending all cards you control to the Graveyard.....You can see the 2nd Sentence it perfect already but not the 1st 4th Card:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, All Dragon-Type monsters you control are unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards.I think you already know your error 5th Card:just a bit errors and remove the border from the card Hope These Help ^^^^^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 1st pic is overused' date=' take out the border of your last picFix:1st Card:[b']Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/b]Tribute is caps, on your side of the field is outdated it's "you control" noe, Damage is caps and they can all fit 1 sentence, opponent's has ' 2nd Card: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Dragon-Type monsters gain 500 ATK during the Battle Phase.you forgot remains (it maybe needed), they can fit 1 sentence, no need of "your" 3rd card: This card can only be Special Summoned by sending all cards you control to the Graveyard.....You can see the 2nd Sentence it perfect already but not the 1st 4th Card:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, All Dragon-Type monsters you control are unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards.I think you already know your error 5th Card:just a bit errors and remove the border from the card Hope These Help ^^^^^_^ Thank you very much! I'll fix it, right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Just remember to cap ^_^Some seem overpowered, but very good none-the-less :) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Cap wordsGrade B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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