My Cards

[Ash_Fear]

alright this is my attempt of a set u'm not sure if they go here but please tell me if they don't all the pics in my cards are random i have no clue where i got them i have over 10,000 pics on my comp so yeah anyway please tell me what you think and reate them thanks ^_^

 

[«₣lџχ»]

Pic needs improvement. (needs a background)

The effects are repeatitive and overused. (some need a background)

OCG and spelling errors. 4/10

[Phantasy Dreamz]

love the pix of thee ladies..... espicially Blackwood^^

[World Eater Gig]

Okay, this might be a while, so bear with me.

Lil Rini - Add a background to the pic. Maybe expand on the description, but it ain't necessary.

The Summoner - I think you meant "This Monster cannot be Normal Summoned. This Monster can be Special Summoned by tributing 1 face up 'Lil Rini'. Once per turn you can add 1 Monster Card from your Deck to your hand." Correct me if I'm wrong.

Rini Lexi of Darkness - Again, add a background, maybe lower the Attack a little. Fine otherwise.

Ashenvale Z Shuukakshamaru (sp?) - Tidy up the effect. I can't tell if it means you can Special Summon and Normal Summon or just Special Summon.

Kyle Night - Lower Attack and up level to six, or make his level above six.

Bottom pair - Again, the pic needs a background.

General - You have some spelling errors (Passion should be Position, etc)

Otherwise, pretty good. Definitely interesting.

[Szaifedias]

Not bad! Some of the effects are really a bit overused, but if they tribute their life for another one, why not ^^!

[Ash_Fear]

these are all based off people i Roleplay with and the ones that tribute themselfs for another are their RP pets thought i'd let you know that

[staticrevenger]

love the pics :)

effects are.. ordinary

minor ocg

 

7/10

[Doctor]

luv the first 3 pics

dont make vanillas

6/10 keep workin

[Ash_Fear]

alright i have made modifications to my cards and i dropped one of them my appoligies to every who posted about it before

[Spire]

Hmm.. let me give you my review.

 

-Now the pics could be better. Remember the pic is the first thing a viewer sees, try to find the best possible pic, bad pics will somtimes get your cards ingored.

-Your OCG is good for a newbie, which is good to see as I despise members with bad OCG, so good job on that.

-I see you have some Normal Monsters, just to let you know, never make a Normal Monster, alot of members hate them, so remember to give them effects.

-The effects are simple and basic, people don't like to see boring effects, try to think of something more interesting, I know you can do it.

 

Overall, I do see some pottentail, but alot of improvment is needed here.

 

And, my rating:

 

Spire's Rating: 6.9/10.

[Ash_Fear]

their may be some out their but i love normal type monsters infact i have a deck based on normal monsters

[Larxene]

I really like the pics ^_^

[Sigma]

awesome work,but everyone above said somethin kinda good,kinda bad,sooooo,8/10,not bad for a new member

[Monqiue01]

I think u did pretty good...evr said that to a newbie b4.but by the amount of grl cards i might think yr lonely...not tryin to be mean just tellin my opinion.but othr than that u did great!!!!!8/10

[Phatt Mann]

Nice pictures...even though some needs backgrounds!

[Chiengu Ruu]

Kool anime picture, but that won't help you get pass my rating system. Work on OCG.

[Ash_Fear]

Thanks to all of you for you grate scores also their might not be any updates to my cards for a while because i have lost my creative spark again

[Monqiue01]

I always thought that alot of japenese anime (female) characters always looked slutty, but good intentions....7/10

[Monkey]

pretty good, godo pics, 7/10

[Ash_Fear]

i have modified some cards and i have also added a couble new cards so please tell me what you think of them ^_^

[AsterikcAde]

Cute anime girls in the pics. Nice set! I would love to use these cards in a real duel! Keep going! 8/10

[Ash_Fear]

i have made some modifications to some cards and i've added new cards and changed pics in a few so please tell me what you think of my latlest update

[JohnnyKwest36]

Some of these names roll right off the tongue...lol (That was sarcasm...don't laugh TOO loudly...)

 

The cards seem somewhat broken. The effects don't really make too much sense to me, NOT because I don't understand them, but because they don't gel well with your other monsters. I don't see how these cards could be used too sucessfully in a Duel. Maybe some more cards need to be made or something.

 

6.1 / for the group of cards. (Sorry I didn't call them a set. They just don't seem like a set to me. But that's just me...)

[Phantasy Dreamz]

I always thought that alot of japenese anime (female) characters always looked slutty' date=' but good intentions....7/10

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WHAT!!!!????>.>

let me ask...... do you watch japanese anime???

cause if you do... you should know that the main attractions are the GURLS^^

*then again, thats not the case if your a girl..... >.>

 

i have modified some cards and i have also added a couble new cards so please tell me what you think of them ^_^

 

they all look nice...... love "Drew Baily"

*i used that pix for 1 of my cards too.... long ago^^

[-DJ-]

not that good needs backrounds the effects were horible 4/10