Doering12 Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Well, i'm sorta bored so i plan to make a whole deck around "Army of the Last Defence". This is the leader and most powerful monster in that deck. Coments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 try and improve minor ocg errors such as caps and spellingfind a picure with a background next timeand that card is very, no sorry, extremely overpowered5/10 make balenced cards next timeeven if he is the stongest, give him 3000 ATK next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doering12 Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 My second card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 First card: Just by virtue of having 4k attack, it's overpowered, then you add its 1000+ effect? Either weaken it or give it some sort of negative along with that. Second card: It's defense, not defence.And your wording is really confusing...Do you mean if the DEF is greater than the attacking monster's ATK? DEF? what? I can't tell.And better pictures please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iAmNateXero Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 I fail to see where its overpowered. If its the attack than is DMK overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doering12 Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Is this card better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iAmNateXero Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 It contradicts itself. Change the entire First two sentences to. "This card can not be Normal summon or Set. This card can not be Special Summoned except..." Fill the "..." with conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 um dudeDEFENCE NOTDEFENSE http://www.thefreedictionary.com/defence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doering12 Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Tell that to OMGKitty...i'm confused xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAGEDJACKAL Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Dark celtic Guardian is overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iAmNateXero Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 ^o.O um... okay... RANDOM! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 um dudeDEFENCE NOTDEFENSE http://www.thefreedictionary.com/defence Fail. It's defense.I fail to see where its overpowered. If its the attack than is DMK overpowered? When attacking it does 5000 damage...And if you don't kill it by battle, it comes back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 can you spell?its DEFENCEmay i ask you what grade your in?because it is in fact spelled D-E-F-E-N-C-Ei even gave a link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 can you spell?its DEFENCEmay i ask you what grade your in?because it is in fact spelled D-E-F-E-N-C-Ei even gave a link Which, next to the word, said "US - Defense"Learn2read plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Omgi dont want to agureits DEFENCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Omgi dont want to agureits DEFENCE de·fence (d-fns)n. & v. Chiefly BritishVariant of defense. The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language' date=' Fourth Edition copyright ©2000 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Updated in 2003. Published by Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.defence or US [b']defense[/b]Noun1. resistance against attack2. something that provides such resistance3. an argument or piece of writing in support of something that has been criticized or questioned4. a country's military resources5. Law a defendant's denial of the truth of a charge6. Law the defendant and his or her legal advisers collectively7. Sport the players in a team whose function is to prevent the opposing team from scoring8. defences fortifications [Latin defendere to defend]defenceless or USdefenseless adj ^From your link.From dictionary.com: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/defense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 so its BOTHdefence is more popular Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 lol, 'defence' comes up wrong on my spellcheck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iAmNateXero Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 um dudeDEFENCE NOTDEFENSE http://www.thefreedictionary.com/defence Fail. It's defense.I fail to see where its overpowered. If its the attack than is DMK overpowered? When attacking it does 5000 damage...And if you don't kill it by battle' date=' it comes back?[/quote'] It only goes up by 1000 if you attack it. And exile force it. It doesn't come back than. Its an okay card, not overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Not bad for a first. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 just small OCG and try getting a better pic or put a background on itgood first card 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 -Bad pic.-Bad OCG. Spire's Rating: 4.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Spell, Trap Card, pic needs background. Overpowered. Lower ATK and DEF to 2000, level to 7. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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