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SYNCHRO MONSTERS


tribal131

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The first one is fairly good but the second one makes less sense.

For starters, remove 4 fiend cards from play? Where from? I also have to say, you should just outright give it 4000 Attack and Defense. That's what the effect does, since you HAVE to remove 4. Finally, I don't think a Synchro Summon is a Normal Summon.

Maybe it should read something like this:

"When this Monster is successfully Summoned, remove 4 Fiend Monsters in your Graveyard from play."

or

"This Monster cannot be Synchro Summoned unless you remove 4 Fiend Monsters in your Graveyard from play."

However, if the Fiend's don't need to be in the Graveyard, please say so.

Other then that, just some grammar errors.

I love the Fiend's pic. Just get rid of the logo in the bottom right. Otherwise, pretty good.

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