Molten Dragon, my new card

[Bengal]

This is a new card I made, I was having some troubles thinking of a name for the card, thats why this ones kind of plain. Here it is though:

 

 

Picture is not mine, I pulled it of Devianart.

[Silent Hunter™]

theree some Errors

OCG Fix:

When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, destroy all monsters you control. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the end of this turn.

you don't have to say (excluding Special Summon) because you can just say both (it's not like it can be Fusion/Synchro/Ritual Summoned), "on your side of the field" is outdated say "you control", you didn't state what Main Phase 1 or 2, "may" is outdated it's "can" now, Misspelled "increase", until, instead of "the" use this"

 

Hope These Help ^^^^

^_^

[Bengal]

Thanks Silent, that helped alot :)

[Seta]

It's a bit OP (overpowered). Try raising his level a bit. And I noticed 1 error:

 

When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, destroy all monsters you control except this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the end of this turn.

 

The error is with u

[~Riku~]

Nice card dude! Silent already pointed out all the mistakes I could see so I have nothing to say on that front 7/10

[Bengal]

I added "excpet this card" and added a level, thanks God.

[Spire]

Hmm..

 

-Overpowered, raise it's level, maybe.

-The pics is overused , so a better one would be appropriate.

 

Overall, it has some pottential but it's not the best.

 

I think my rating should be:

 

Spire's Rating: 7.2/10.

[vang911]

overpowered, overused pic.

[Professor Cobra]

Change level to 8, increase (missed an 'a'), good pic. 9/10

[Chaos Impact™]

Overused pic but's it's screaming to me to make it realistic.

Grade B