∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 tell me if there are any errorsthanks in the advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Cool picture but there are some OCG errors. opponents should be opponent'sgraveyard should be Graveyard a little edditing needed and it will be fine 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 "If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may remove a card in your opponent's hand from play" the bolded areas are the fixes. ^_^ looks a tad overpowered, though it isnt too much so... good at level 5. ^_^ 8/10 ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 woot i give it a 10/10!new cardits minor but coolso far thats 3 for my seriesbumpthmx muchi changed itbumpBUmpwhy wont it work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 ....I'm not going to get into a defense/defence argument here too XD First card is good Second: Spell, not magic, Trap, not trapAnd you rated your own card? O.oAnd try not to bump more than once in a 24 hour period Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 it wont let me postwoahnvm awesomesorry if i screwed up (first fusion)+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Good pic, a couple of OCG errors (Caps and full stop at end of effect). Other than that, effect is good and balanced. Very nice and simple card. Card Rating: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 -Ok pic.-Simple effect. Spire's Rating: 7.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Lower level to 4, good pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfDragonGod Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 some nice card some have a little grammar error's but i am not much better with my card so good luck with all of your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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