newly-fan Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 I'm new but I know how to make a deck. I hope you like it my Zodiac Deck. I know I need more Spell and Trap cards for 12 monsters but I'm working on it. They may suck for some of you but can you help me out on how to make these cards look and have better everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gary9672001 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 The first card image just......idk doesn't really fit and well i just scan through it and it seems awesome xD Great job for now until someone finds a mistake xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 You may think you know how to make one hell of a deck (i'm not the best to assess that claim), but I know for sure you are not good with OCG and card making; there are too many OCG errors to account, but knowing this forum others will point them out soon enough. Pics are ok except for Aeris (painting doesn't work really) and Weaponry (no background). No Rating because I think these effects are good and balanced, but due to the huge amount of errors I can see on these cards the rating would be poor (around 3 or 4 for the set), and I think you could have such a better rating with just a little more work. So use the OCG Thread and look at other cards on this Forum and learn from other's mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Effects balnaced and good,Grade B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 good effects good ocg7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 -Many OCG errors.-Pics could be better. Spire's Rating: 4.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klevis Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 pics good be better. Quite a few ocg errors, but overall a great idea, if you worked on the effects ocg and pics you could come back with some awesome cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vang911 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 some OCG errors. the first pic is "different",good job for a new member.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newly-fan Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 -Many OCG errors.-Pics could be better. Spire's Rating: 4.3/10. I know I'm not good at this and Aries' picture sucks but it's not easy to make cards. What are the pictures (Aries) that need improvment and what's OCG?You may think you know how to make one hell of a deck (i'm not the best to assess that claim)' date=' but I know for sure you are not good with OCG and card making; there are too many OCG errors to account, but knowing this forum others will point them out soon enough. Pics are ok except for Aeris (painting doesn't work really) and Weaponry (no background). No Rating because I think these effects are good and balanced, but due to the huge amount of errors I can see on these cards the rating would be poor (around 3 or 4 for the set), and I think you could have such a better rating with just a little more work. So use the OCG Thread and look at other cards on this Forum and learn from other's mistakes.[/quote'] Yeah I know I suck at this, but I'm just new here and I know it's not easy to make a full deck of new cards, so can you point out the things I need to work on (Aries' picture) and you just tell me, oh and what's OCG?pics good be better. Quite a few ocg errors' date=' but overall a great idea, if you worked on the effects ocg and pics you could come back with some awesome cards.[/quote'] What's OCG effects and how can I make them better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 interesting... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 oh and what's OCG? OCG = Original Card Grammar, which is the way a card's effect is written on a card in the Real Game, so OCG errors are wordings that are incorrect in the way Konami word the cards they publish/release to the public. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 hey!these cards are very balanced,with some great pictures,but as people have said,many errors in grammar and wording. out of the monsers,im Aries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfDragonGod Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 wow sweet deck of cards you have nice choice of cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newly-fan Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 wow sweet deck of cards you have nice choice of cards... Well thanks, since you have more time here, can you help me fix the OCG errors that these cards have because most people have told me that these cards have alot or some OCG errors, can you help me fix them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 I will help you with OCG.Capitalize the following:Life PointsBattle Phase, Draw Phase etc.WATER, FIRE, DARK etc.DeckDragon-Type, Fairy-Type etc.Special Summon, Summon, Normal Summon, Set, Fusion Summon etc.write 1, not oneIf "Temple of Astros" , you forgot the quotation marksLevel 5, Level 3 etc.Deckface-up, dash in the middle :) thats all for now, if you need more help PM me :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bandai Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 not bad not bad NOW MAKE A CHINESE ZODIAC >_< 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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