NEW CARD [SKY WARRIOR] I' NEED A FIX OR RATE!!

[Sayaka]

Here my new card,Warrior-Type,fix and rate please:

 

 

Sky Warrior Abrax

Sky Warrior Abrax

 

When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, activate 1 of the following effects, based on how this card was destroyed:

-By battle: Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position. -By a monster effect: Remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. -By a Spell Card: Roll a 6-sided die one. If you rolled a 2, 3 or 5, add up 2 Spell cards from your Deck to your hand. -By a Trap Card: Toss a coin. If the result is Heads, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Otherwise, remove from play this card in your Graveyard.

[staticrevenger]

effects --> forgot the "s" in effects on the first line

roll 6d Dice--> fifth line, error, remove the "d"

 

otherwise O.O awesome :)

[Spire]

-Few OCG errros.

 

Spire's Rating: 8.7/10.

[Doctor]

another awesome card

w0w!

but i agree with ruin

[Sayaka]

Ok thanks...i've correct the ocg errors... XDD

[Bengal]

Nice card, cool picture, pretty good OCG, and a nice effect.

 

Im not sure, but in the second effect,

monster effect should be Monster Card Effect

 

In the third effect I think,

Spell card should be Spell Card

and Trap card should be Trap Card

 

9/10

[Klevis]

Almost perfect. I wouldn't mind using this card in my deck. 9.2

[Sayaka]

Thanks.. i've create the image about holo effect...but i' need to work more

[Silent Hunter™]

You fixed it but there are some OCG Errors

Fix:

Card:

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:

-If this card is destroyed by battle you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 1500 or less ATK in Attack Position.

-If this card is destroyed by a monster effect, you can remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent control.

-If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card, Roll a 6 Dice, if the result is 2, 3 or 5, you can add up to 2 Spell cards from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle the Deck.

-If this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, flip a coin, if the result is Heads, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase, if the result is Tails, remove from play this card in your Graveyard.

Attack Position is caps, you don't have to say face-up because its already in Attack Position, the 2nd effect it says "opponents" which is supposed to be "opponent". You forgot to say "to" before number 2, Card is caps in "Spell Card" and "Trap Card", you don't actually have to say effect after Spell and Trap Card. The "flip" can also be "toss" but there both correct ^_^

 

Hope These Help ^^^^^

:D

[Chaos Impact™]

A Couple of OCG errors.

Grade B

[bury the year]

When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, activate 1 of the following effects, based on how this card was destroyed:

-By battle: Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position. -By a monster effect: Remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. -By a Spell Card: Roll a 6-sided die one. If you rolled a 2, 3 or 5, add up 2 Spell cards from your Deck to your hand. -By a Trap Card: Toss a coin. If the result is Heads, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Otherwise, remove from play this card in your Graveyard.

 

^OCG fix^

[Professor Cobra]

Grammar problems, as stated above, good pic and effect. 8/10

[Sayaka]

Ok,I've fixed the effect,thanks at all

[Tabris]

You fixed it but there are some OCG Errors

Fix:

Card:

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard' date=' you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:

-If this card is destroyed by battle you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 1500 or less ATK in Attack Position.

-If this card is destroyed by a monster effect, you can remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent control.

-If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card, Roll a 6 Dice, if the result is 2, 3 or 5, you can add up to 2 Spell cards from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle the Deck.

-If this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, flip a coin, if the result is Heads, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase, if the result is Tails, remove from play this card in your Graveyard.[/b']

 

Hope These Help ^^^^^

:D

 

 

Basing off Silent Hunter, I'd say:

 

- First effect is pretty much unneeded. Warriors are more productive being RotAed.

 

- Second? Decent.

 

- Third screams OMG! No, Sayaka, 2 Spells scream for abuse, and I suggest you trim it down to 1.

 

- Fourth is decent.

 

Because of the third effect:

 

4/10

[Sayaka]

4/10 for the third effect?? Bah...

[Zigzix]

8.5 one small error i saw it says roll a six-sided die one when it should say once just a small error lol but i can't help to have the urge to correct lol

[Sayaka]

Thanks

[Phantasy Dreamz]

meh......... not bad

just that the "destroyed by Spell Card effect" can be ov'pwing.......

suggestion, make the result just 2 and 5......... less chance=less ov'pwig

other effects seems alright.....

6/10

[dirgeofcereberus77]

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, activate 1 of the following effects, based on how this card was destroyed:

•By battle: Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position.

•By a monster effect: Remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

•By a Spell Card: Roll a 6-sided die one. If you rolled a 2, 3 or 5, add up 1 Spell cards from your Graveyard to your hand.

•By a Trap Card: Toss a coin. If the result is Heads, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase.If the result is tails remove this card from play.

 

found a possible pic replacements