king shoeface Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Another new card: Comment and help me improve Edited with the help ofPhantasy Dreamer Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 as far as i know,the card is okay but do they use X=for each?9/10 because i don't know if the X=is used for each. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 bland effectocg errors6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king shoeface Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Well can you tell me how to fix the OCG errors or how to make the card better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonxxTamer Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Uhm... not sure if you can use X. I use "by".. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 you asking me to help......??sure.. my specialty is helping^^ correct ocg in my opinion:"This card can only be equipped to "Dark Magician". The equipped monster gains ATK equal to the number of Spellcaster-Type monsters in your Graveyard x200." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king shoeface Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Thank you edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 happy to help^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 I think it's time 200, good pic, increase the ATK of the equipped monster, great pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 I think it's time 200' date=' good pic, increase the ATK of the equipped monster, great pic. 9/10[/quote'] newer ocg uses "gains/lose"...... increase/decrease are rarely used anymore..and x200 would be correct.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 One more thing, there should be a space in between 'x' and '200.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banana_face24 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 there's writing on the bottom of the pic and it's a bit squasheda few ocg problems but good effect8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 It's good.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king shoeface Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bandai Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 not bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 shouldn't it by or times the number of spellcaster type monsters in your graveyard instead of X? (yes the first one would be the obvious choice) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanakuro Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Would work well with my Bright Magician card!! Yay!! That and I loves the Spellcasters!! <333 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Good simple card, good OCG, try to keep writing out of the picture though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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