∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 OCG is fixedi give this a 10/10 Activate 1 of the following effects when this card is destroyed:-Special Summon 1 DARK Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck.-Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 ocg is offand the first effect is ov'pw if you dont limit the ss monster in someway..........5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 well then please help me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 sureok....... if me, i would-limit the ss DARK monster to a lv4 or lower-lower its lv to 6 then ill fix ocg after that^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 okay i did it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laconus Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 This card looks like its playable but Special Summoning any DARK monster from your Deck is a little overpowered, and its Level is pretty high. so overall (after the ocg is fixed) i give it a 6/10 Card Lore:When this card is destroyed, select and activate one of the following effects: -If this card was destroyed by battle, you can select 1 DARK monster from your Deck and Special Summon it. The Deck is then shuffled.-inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 "When this card is destroyed, choose 1 of the 3 following effects:-Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard- ...I have no idea what you are trying to say here...-Destroy 1 Trap/Spell card on your opponent's field" Nice pic.This card looks like its playable but Special Summoning any DARK monster from your Deck is a little overpowered' date=' and its Level is pretty high. so overall (after the ocg is fixed) i give it a 6/10 Card Lore:When this card is destroyed, select and activate one of the following effects: -If this card was destroyed by battle, you can select 1 DARK monster from your Deck and Special Summon it. The Deck is then shuffled.-inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field.[/quote'] blahg! You beat me to posting! D:lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 yours:This card has three effects you can choose from once it's destroyed,-When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can special summon any DARK type monster from your deck.-You can send 500 attack points straight to the enemy. -Destroy a TRAP/MAGIC card on the opponent's side of the field mines:Activate 1 of the following effects when this card is destroyed:-Special Summon 1 DARK Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck.-Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. *hope this helps out..^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Much better. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 spank you very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Your OCG is nearly perfect (and that's hard to do!) but there's still a few things wrong. This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type. When this card is destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects:-Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Deck.-Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Remove the "Fiend" from the type line, and it'll be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Demon Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Follow tectonix's advise and I'll give it a 10/10, othrwise it will be 8/10Nice card though! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 And there you go! It's one of the better acrds I've seen from anyone! I'll give it a 8.5/10 I'll tell you what you did wrong. The first phrase says "Activate 1 of the following effects when this card is destroyed: ..." but it would be much better if it were "When this card is destroyed, select and activate 1 of the following effects: ..." That would be all :D -PD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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