Xeria Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 [align=center]My first card Art Credit Goes to me. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 way Oped, ocg is ok though, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeria Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epee Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 atk is way to high. Do you get the effect when he reaches that level? otherwise its good, just shrink the atk a bit. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeria Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 thanks newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 effect = okay pic = bad ocg = okay, just a few errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 this card is overpowered. level 1 (to start at) and already 2000 ATK? and when it gets up to level 8, draw 5 cards? huh?? you can speed up time with some synchro boosts, as it will boost its level. and you can add some noisy gnats to do the same... this card is wayyyyyy overpowered. try reducing the stats to at the most 500. then reduce some of the effects... maybe 3 cards instead of 5. its okay, since this is your first card. dont get downhearted. ^_^ it actually is pretty good for a first card. very new effect. 6.9/10 keep it up. ;) ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeria Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ok thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ok thanks. youre welcome. ;) any time you want help, you can PM me. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeria Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ok.I will XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 way overpowered. 2000 atk is pretty high for a level 1 monster, if you havent noticed, why dont you make at each 'level up' it gains some ATK? and change 2000 to.. 600 at the most Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeria Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 quite OP (reason's explained above), effect is quite interesting though, pic is odd and a bit bland. Card Rating: 4/10 - OP is OP, and that can't be forgiven. However it's your first try, so nice try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 -Way overpowered.-Pic could be better. Spire's Rating: 4.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 When are the effects activated?6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatchetman_354 Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 GAY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Change damage or Life Point increase to 1000, first line should start like:"Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, by paying 1000 Life Points, you can increase this card's level by 1". Can, not may. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 GAY NOT GAY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DBZmaker Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 not so good pic but good effects but the text to small i could barly read it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Interesting way of list effects. Ok pic.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 GAY The fact that the pic is meh and the effect has OCG errors...yeah...I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giga Bowser Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 8.9/10Good Effect + 9.3Overpowered - .2Bad Pic - .2Overall, Keep it up. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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