∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Shadows of Abyss UpdateDark Machine Warlord Description:This card is treated as a fiendActivate 1 of the following effects when this card is destroyed:-Special Summon 1 DARK Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck.-Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.-Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. Deity DemonDemon Lord DragnarkDemon ReaperDemon Swordsman OzokuaDemon Warrior ReapokuaWinged Demon Preist(NEW!)Description:Flip: Choose 1 of the following effects:-Destroy 1 monster on your opponent's field whose ATK is lower than this card's.-Special Summon any monster from your deck whose ATK is less than this card's.-Select a Trap card on the field. Destroy the selected card.-Select a Magic card on the field. Destroy the selected card.-Send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard.Demon Master Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newly-fan Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 very nice idea overall (now that I know what OCG is) you have mild OCG errors on your cards that you should take in consideration but in spit of those errors this deck is not so bad I'll give you an 7.5 out of 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer Of The Apocalypse Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 very nice idea overall (now that I know what OCG is) you have mild OCG errors on your cards that you should take in consideration but in spit of those errors this deck is not so bad I'll give you an 7.5 out of 10Q4E Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YuugiCM Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 very nice it would look better iif you cropped the image so we can see the robot thingy guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 very nice idea overall (now that I know what OCG is) you have mild OCG errors on your cards that you should take in consideration but in spit of those errors this deck is not so bad I'll give you an 7.5 out of 10Q4E Q4E Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 well than guys wanna help with ocg? please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Never fear! I'm here to save the day! Machine Warlord: Fiend-type.I'd say "When this card is destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects", but I don't think there' anything technically wrong with what you have right now. I can't see Deity Demon so skip that for now... Demon Lord: it's always 'can', never 'may'. I'd probably say "You can select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Remove that card from play." But again, that's more of a personal taste of mine than actual error on your part. Demon Reaper:It's Position now, not Mode. And I still think it's defense, lol XDIt's Spell, not magic, and both Spell and Trap are caps. Demon Swordsman: I'd say "an ATK lower than this card's" but again, my personal tastes... Demon Warrior: "When this card is destroyed, you can select 2 cards on your opponent's field. Remove the selected cards from play." This set could benefit from some more complex effects, but what you have right now isn't too bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 new cardand ill change those thanks kat When this card is flipped you can choose 1 of the 5 special effects listed.-Destroy 1 Monster on you opponent's field that has less ATK-Summon any monster from your deck with less ATK than this one-Destroy any trap card-Destroy any magic card-Send this card into the graveyard in exchange for another monster in your opponent's graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Flip: Choose 1 of the following effects:-Destroy 1 monster on your opponent's field whose ATK is lower than this card's.-Special Summon any monster from your deck whose ATK is less than this card's.-Select a Trap card on the field. Destroy the selected card.-Same thing-Send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard. Uh. DEF is too high, in my opinion. make it under 3000.Pretty good effects, but the last one may be a bit strong.Oh. I see Deity Demon now. "Flip: Destroy all Spell cards on the field."It's overpowered...2800 DEF means that your opponent more than likely just lost some LP attacking it, and then it would have cost them all their Spell cards, and then you could switch it to ATK pos and do some heavy damage. Lower the ATK and change the effect to affect you also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 i fixed everything(almost) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 -Some nice pics, however..-Bad OCG. Spire's Rating: 6.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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