laconus Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 My Newest Cards That I Have Made. Rate And Comment However You Want, But If You See An OCG Error, Or If You Think The Card Is Over/Under-Powered Please State Why! [align=center]Ropopochi When you Draw this card from your Deck, you may reveal it to your opponent to gain 400 Life Points for each other card in your hand. Leogrin When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points Miasmic Battlefield As long as this card remains face up on the field, negate any effect that increases your opponent's Life Points. During a player's Standby Phase, inflict 400 damage to that player. Majujarrin You can discard 1 card to Normal Summon this card from your hand without offering a monster as a Tribute. During your Main Phase you can discard 1 monster card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. Shadowmage Dirrin When this destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can select 1 card from your hand and place it on top of your Deck. If your opponent recieved damage that isn't battle damage during this turn, you can select 1 card from your Graveyard and place it on top of your Deck instead. Mirrored Movements When you change the battle position of a monster on your side of the field, you can change the battle position of 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field to match the battle position of your monster.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ropopochi: other, not othe...and I think it might be a bit strong, just because it has 1600 DEF...not to mention that if you hold an average of 4 cards in your hand, thats a +1600 to your LP...maybe make it lower? Leogrin: should go more like: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" Miasmic Battlefield: "As long as this card remains face up on the field, negate any effect that increases your opponent's Life Points." I have no idea how to re-word the second half. Majujarrin: lol. This card's name makes me think of Marijuana.It can't be a Normal Summon if it's using an effect to Summon it.Second half of it is way overpowered. I...can't think of an effective way to keep it. But if you do, you need to make it much more costly to the user to activate it. Shadowmage: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select 1 card in your hand and place it on the top of your Deck. If your opponent suffer additional damage to their Life Points, select 1 card from your Graveyard and place it on top of your Deck."The second part is a bit over the top...and I don't think it can be 'instead'...that's just confusing.. Mirrored Movements: Good OCG here. A bit cheap...either make it so it's not a continuous, or have a Life Point payment to activate, or something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IxxSIGxxI Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ropopochi: other' date=' not othe...and I think it might be a bit strong, just because it has 1600 DEF...not to mention that if you hold an average of 4 cards in your hand, thats a +1600 to your LP...maybe make it lower? Leogrin: should go more like: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" Miasmic Battlefield: "As long as this card remains face up on the field, negate any effect that increases your opponent's Life Points." I have no idea how to re-word the second half. Majujarrin: lol. This card's name makes me think of Marijuana.It can't be a Normal Summon if it's using an effect to Summon it.Second half of it is way overpowered. I...can't think of an effective way to keep it. But if you do, you need to make it much more costly to the user to activate it. Shadowmage: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select 1 card in your hand and place it on the top of your Deck. If your opponent suffer additional damage to their Life Points, select 1 card from your Graveyard and place it on top of your Deck."The second part is a bit over the top...and I don't think it can be 'instead'...that's just confusing.. Mirrored Movements: Good OCG here. A bit cheap...either make it so it's not a continuous, or have a Life Point payment to activate, or something...[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Ropopochi: other' date=' not othe...and I think it might be a bit strong, just because it has 1600 DEF...not to mention that if you hold an average of 4 cards in your hand, thats a +1600 to your LP...maybe make it lower? Leogrin: should go more like: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" Miasmic Battlefield: "As long as this card remains face up on the field, negate any effect that increases your opponent's Life Points." I have no idea how to re-word the second half. Majujarrin: lol. This card's name makes me think of Marijuana.It can't be a Normal Summon if it's using an effect to Summon it.Second half of it is way overpowered. I...can't think of an effective way to keep it. But if you do, you need to make it much more costly to the user to activate it. Shadowmage: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select 1 card in your hand and place it on the top of your Deck. If your opponent suffer additional damage to their Life Points, select 1 card from your Graveyard and place it on top of your Deck."The second part is a bit over the top...and I don't think it can be 'instead'...that's just confusing.. Mirrored Movements: Good OCG here. A bit cheap...either make it so it's not a continuous, or have a Life Point payment to activate, or something...[/quote']Shut up. You're an idiot. If he wants to post in Realistic, he should learn to make cards. Even then, I thought these were pretty good. Sorry if I'm not a mindless loser like you, who goes around saying 'great cards!' without bothering to look. MY post will actually help with OCG and balancing. YOUR post just takes up space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 -Good pics.-Good OCG.-Basic effects. Spire's Rating: 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid23 Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 i say a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 They are not bad. But, just kind-of OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Please read the Rules, then, when you have figured out why I have locked your thread, please PM me the answer and the link to your thread. EDIT: Issue resolved. Thank You for reading the Rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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