jjjamesss123 Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Please Rate and Reply Effect:Pay 1000 Life Points to place this card on the field. You can place any amount of DARK monsters from your hand under this card during each of your End Phases. For every Level Star those cards have you can put a Dark counter on this card. The card(s) under this card are removed from play. When this card has 20 Dark counters, send all of the cards under this card to the Graveyard and Special Summon one DARK monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. Your opponent can also place LIGHT monsters under this card during his/her End Phase. For every Level Star your opponent's monsters have you lose Dark counters. If you have no Dark counters on this card, remove it from play and destroy any LIGHT monsters under it. You then lose 500 Life Points for every LIGHT monster under this card. Special Thanks to OMGAKITTY for correcting me on my mistakes. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Interesting...I think you should mention what happens to the cards that are 'under' the spell (can they still attack/defend? or are they essentially removed from play? do they still take up monster zones?)I'd say 'place' instead of 'put'What happens to the light monsters when you reach 20 counters? do they go to the Graveyard too?While I can't place anything specific, something about the effect as a whole feels off to me OCG-wise...I think it might have to do with you saying 'dark monsters' without specifying an amount...I dunno :/ But it's an interesting card, and has definite potential. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjjamesss123 Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Thanks ill be a little more detailed.. fixing it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 -Interesting effect.-Good OCG. Spire's Rating: 8.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Interesting idea, cool pic.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DBZmaker Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 i rate it 10/10 for its grammer, title and picture AKA its awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Pic is good, effect is balanced and very intreguing - I had to read it about 2 or 3 times before I could understand it fully. OCG is good except for:". You can place DARK any amount of monsters from your hand..."... shouldn't that be ". You can place any amount of DARK monsters from your hand...". < Error ammended Card Rating: 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjjamesss123 Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Thanks alot, i fixed the errors you told me about StevenBray. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YuugiCM Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 nicely done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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