Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 well, i woke up at 4:30 am this morning, not really sure why at the time. So i went downstairs got on my laptop, and after talking with tea. I just began to write my essay, and i didn't stop untill i got down to my conclusion, but god i must have pressed the backspace button like 3 million times.. any whoot, this is what i came up with, and agian, i still have yet to write my conclusion... [align=center] Professor Composition 12129 August 2008 SAFETY, AND HOW IT SWADDLED ME IN THE ARMS OF DANGER Sacrifice is a part of life that all will inevitably experience. It endows us to attain what we desire, whether or not we achieve our originally intended goal. However, it does have it's own downside, because to obtain what we want, it requires us to allow something we perceive to own or hold dear to be thrown asunder to protect what we perceive sets our living excursion. My sacrifice, allowing safety to swaddle me into the arms of danger, vividly expresses just how immensely the imperfection of having to let something go constricts and molds life. Friendship allows everyone to experience the act of kindness, as well as how it feels to be in a relationship, without actually having to be in a relationship. But, being a teen with self-image issues, even the small act of friendship, was extended to a finominal sacrifice. Aristotle once said, “What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies.” Perhaps the one relation that has survived the trials and tribulations of time and has still remained unconditional, is friendship. Friendship is the uniquest act, man has ever created, second, only to Love. Mutual respect and strong attachment, are what friends share between each other. But, in order for a friendship to thrive, one must be able to let down their guards and allow the flow of trust and emotion to bond them to each other. This, is where safety, swaddles me into the arms of danger, because I am not one to share emotion, nor indow trust upon those who need it. That, is what ruins a man, its what pushes me to the edge of emotion, only to faulter and with drawl back into myself. Religion, a term so widely known and used, but lacks context and true meaning, at the same time, one basic belief, spread throughout several cultures, twists and constorts what, and why, Religion really is. The reason Religion exists is to help people make sense of events which would otherwise be incomprehensible by relying on unseen, hidden forces. But to a man who has to have a reason for everything, cannot let his trust lay on the belief that one almighty man can help him through his journey. Science and Christianity, a battle of the wits, and a battle of the trustworthy, those who seek not answers, but help, go the path of god. But those who seek reason, and answers, go the path of science. Why in a world so dominated by opinions, and answers, can one able bodied society rest it's foundation upon the belief that we are all created equal, yet turn around and deem those of the same sex, unfit? Or go through decades of enslavement, only to contradict themselves in those beliefs they vowed to follow? I cannot, and will not, rest myself in the comfort of the lord, without the reassurance that I am truly protected. Giving up this belief, this act that raises hope, I leave dormant the pain of stress, and mistrust, only for it to effect me at a later point in time. Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails. (-1Corinthians 13:4-8a) This verse describes the characteristics of true love. Chosen from the attributes of Jesus Christ, this does truly represent those at peace with themselves. The problem with trying to “find” love, is that too often we don't look for these characteristics. Rather we look at physical appearance, popularity, or wealth. To a teen, living with obesity, or even minor scholiosis, the agony, and the embarrasement of always setting yourself up to fail, and failing, is what strickens today's teens with anger, and out rage. Their voice, their hero, their actions, being to save themselves, set them into a dominance no unmerciful act can betray, shows the side that adults are always trying to fix. A simple plan, a simple diet, an act of kindness, or even a thank you, could set the attitude of teens from defiant and scared, to willing and loved. But to hide oneself from the world, because of fear of rejection, is just one safety net to many. Let him be-cast his chains, and walk into the world a free man unburdened by likes of physical appearance, yet viewed by the character of his personality.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wow, I am amazed. Like I said over MSN, I don't have a clue what to say, as I, myself, am too young to understand any of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wow' date=' I am amazed. Like I said over MSN, I don't have a clue what to say, as I, myself, am too young to understand any of it.[/quote'] o.0..i keep forgetting that your god cyber >_> lol but thanks though, its ok, i had to look up a few words myself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Bravo! That is some deep, yet interesting stuff to read Bloodrun. Also glad to hear your writer's block vanished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Bravo! That is some deep' date=' yet interesting stuff to read Bloodrun. Also glad to hear your writer's block vanished.[/quote'] lol, thanks alot rose. I just really, hope it doesnt happen again >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 ._. My writer's block hasn't :| So kudos... As for this article, stating the obvious much? :P Love the presentation though and its VERY well written ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Man this is heck of a good thing. I'm glad your writers block vanished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 ._. My writer's block hasn't :| So kudos... As for this article' date=' stating the obvious much? :P Love the presentation though and its VERY well written ^_^[/quote'] stating the obvious? o.0my professor said, be flat out serious... soo yeahhh.. lol i think the only thing thats VERY well written, is the intro.. but thats just me.. but thanks though loland thanks d-vader ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 I'm proud. I'm beyond proud. This verse describes the characteristics of true love. Chosen from the attributes of Jesus Christ, this does truly represent those at peace with themselves. ^^ That. That line just uped the Essay's worth from a random teen's essay to an essay with a real message, or at least it did to me. Good writing, run it through Spell/grammar Checker, especially the grammar, too many comma's and stuff, but it's solid stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 I'm proud. I'm beyond proud. This verse describes the characteristics of true love. Chosen from the attributes of Jesus Christ' date=' this does [b']truly represent those at peace with themselves.[/b] ^^ That. That line just uped the Essay's worth from a random teen's essay to an essay with a real message, or at least it did to me. Good writing, run it through Spell/grammar Checker, especially the grammar, too many comma's and stuff, but it's solid stuff. wow, thanks static =)and yeah, i ran it through the spell, ill have to squeeze it through for grammar, but i need you to get on msn =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 I have work in a couple hours, and I have a rule that I don't go on IM within three hours of work, because I have a tendency to linger too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 I have work in a couple hours' date=' and I have a rule that I don't go on IM within three hours of work, because I have a tendency to linger too long.[/quote'] Awwh, damn it!i wanted to talk to you about that conclusion >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Notes for future reference: center aligning is bad, and put empty space between paragraphs. I'm impressed if you wrote this that quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bakura Vessal Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wow' date=' I am amazed. Like I said over MSN, I don't have a clue what to say, as I, myself, am too young to understand any of it.[/quote'] um are you cyber altra? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Notes for future reference: center aligning is bad' date=' and put empty space between paragraphs. I'm impressed if you wrote this that quickly.[/quote'] i typed this is in word, it was double spaced >_>and yeah.. me too and sos, next time, pm him that question -.-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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