∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 This is gonna be the pretty much "Boss Card" (and last card) of my Shadow of Abyss packWhen this card is destroyed as a result of battle, activate one of the following effects:-By paying 1500 Life Points, you can remove 2 of your opponent's cards from play.-By paying 1500 Life Points, you can Special Summon a card from you or your opponent's Graveyard.-Special Summon a card from your hand with lower ATK than this card.-Special Summon a card from your hand with lower DEF than this card.-Destroy a Spell/Trap card on your opponent's side of the field.-Special Summon a Level 5 or lower DARK monster from your hand.-Special Summon a Level 5 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your hand.When this card is destroyed, remove this card from play. Special thanks to Skylarman1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 A card with that much power needs a special way of summoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ill add a cost to each effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 some ocg errors...By offering 1500 Life Points, you can remove 2 of your opponent's cards from play.By offering 1500 Life Points, you can Special Summon a card from you or your opponent's Graveyard.Special Summon a card from your hand with lower ATK than this card.Special Summon a card from your hand with lower DEF than this card.Destroy a Spell/Trap card on your opponent's side of the field.Special Summon a Level 5 or lower DARK monster from your hand.Special Summon a Level 5 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your hand.When this card is destroyed, remove this card from play. that should fix any errors it has. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jump4h Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 okay, your effects are nice and balanced (although in real life this card would be so awesome that it'd only be a Ghost rare). You need to give it some special summoning condition (like "remove from play 4 dark monsters from your grave to summon this monster").Your grammar/wording is a little substandard, but if you fixed the wording i'd give it a 9/10. The only reason it wouldn't get a 10/10 is because, even though you typed out the effect, it still isn't readable from the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 thnx guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ok you fixed it. now you get a 9.9/10, since youd have to use a magnifying glass to read the effect. great card :D and thx for the special thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 lol9.9im 1 decimal from perfection! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 well its not his fault you can't read the writing thats what the card maker automatically does whe you have over a certain amount of sentences Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 OCG is bad - never use offering on a card effect - among other things. Pic is alright, maybe a little too dark, and you don't need a new paragraph for each new effect; that's what the full stop was invented for. Effect is OP. Card Rating: 3/10 - OP is OP and is intolerable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 my bad. instead of 'offering; you were supposed to use 'paying'. oops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Before you post list effects, you should say: Select and activate one of the following effects:___________________________________________ Seen the pic before, but I'm unsure if it's overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 updateand ive seen that pic 3 times including mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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