Heaven's Blaze

[Infernalhero]

This is my newest set,Heaven's Blaze,and I was just wanting to show it off,so I have only 4 cards done,and would be very glad if you guys would post or pm me any new ideas,willing to give +3 reps to accepted ideas.

 

[spoiler=Level 10]

[spoiler=Lore]

Lore:

This Monster can not be Normal Summoned or Set.This Monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Armored Angel LV 7".When this Monster attacks a monster activate the Appropriate effect according to the targeted Monster's Position:

Face-Up Attack:If this Monster Destroys the Targeted Monster Flip a coin,Heads:Deal Damage equal to half of the destroyed Monster's effect,Tails:Your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster,level 4 or lower,face-up.

Face-up Defense:Flip a coin.Heads:Destroy the monster with no effect applied.Your Battle Phase is ended.Tails:Destroy the Monster,Effect Applied.

Face-Down Defense:When the Monster is flipped Face-Up flip a coin.Heads:The Monster is Destroyed(No effect Applied).Tails:The Monster is Flipped and it's effect can be used twice.

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Level 7]

Lore:

This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effect of "Armored Angel of the Blue Flame LV 4".When this monster attacks flp a coin.Heads:The targeted Monster is destroyed.

Tails:The targeted monster is destroyed(no battle damage is applied),your opponent can then set 1 monster in Face-Down Defense Position.During your End Phase,if this card attacked your opponent's Life Points Directly,you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Armored Angel of the Blue Flame LV 10" from your Hand,Deck, or Graveyard.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Level 4]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Level 1]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reciora,Valkyrie of Valhalla]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Valhalla,Hall of the Gods]

 

 

 

I may change a few of the pics later if they're getting bad ratings.But still I hope you like^_^.And if they're are any OCG errors please tell me where and how it should sound and look.

[Infernalhero]

Plz Post

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Not a bad idea. Lv 1's pic could be better though.

8/10

[Infernalhero]

I know I plan on drawing it if I can't find something better.Thanx for the reply

[Silas Angel]

yea.. What DeMeNTeD said.. and also the holo could be better..

[Infernalhero]

I'm still practicing on GIMP.Sorry.

[Silas Angel]

its ok.. just need a lil improvement..

[Infernalhero]

thanx:)

[StevenBray]

Not bad, OCG seems alright, within tolerence. Pics are good, except the holos are a bit iffy (I'm not a huge fan of holos anyway). Effect seem balanced and fair.

 

Card Ratings: 7/10, 7/10, 8/10, 7/10

Group Rating: 7.25/10

[Infernalhero]

thanx

[spitfire skateboards]

8/10

[Infernalhero]

Thanx^_^

[PrimalFear]

idk all the pics are a little rough i sugjest some work on them better backgrounds proply be better

[Infernalhero]

Thanx,and 2 new Cards added.Valhalla,Hall of the Gods and Reciora,Valkyrie of Valhalla.

[Yankee]

Your grammar/ocg is off a bit, such as, it's Warrior-Type, not warrior type...

 

While there are some issues, these are not really bad at all. I like these ^_^

 

7/10

 

- Yankeefan

[Infernalhero]

Thanx

[Yankee]

No problem

 

- Yankeefan

[Infernalhero]

plz I need more feedback

[CrabHelmet]

You have neglected the possibility of Face-Down Attack Position - a grave error.

[Smeg]

not so much ocg errors but actual grammer isues, you do not continue a word right after a comma like this: she was like awesome,cool and happy.

but it SHOULD be like this: she was like awesome, cool and happy

Same with full stop and colon

[Infernalhero]

@Crab Helmet:Which one because I think I only put it on Lv 10.

@Norty Nort:Thanx,I'll remember that