DarkAlliance765 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Hey people, I'm new here and this my first card! I hope you guys like it! I think I followed most of what the OCG thread said. But here you go: Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 LIGHT monsters and 2 DARK monsters from your Graveyard. This card is also treated as a DARK monster. When This card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, select and activate one of the following effects:- Increase your Life Points equal to half of the damage dealt.- Pay 700 Life Points to destroy 1 face-down card on the field.- Pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 cards. Oh, and I do not own any of the artwork :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 it was all good until the last line. ^_^ The cost for the 2 cards should be upped, or the card draw should be one. ^_^ But, since this is your first card, this is excelent. Almost too excelent... You have merit here in the forum, I have no doubt you will put an impression on some people here, as I have. I am Kale. *extends hand* Hope you enjoy your stay... ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TribalMaster Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAlliance765 Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 What's A merit? Oh, and I changed the card draw to one ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 By merit, I mean that you could do some great things here. ^_^ I gave you a +rep btw, I feel that you deserve it for how great this first card of yours is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 your ocg:When This card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points activate one of the following effects: correct ocg: When this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, select and activate one of the following effects: also where it says "2 DARK monster from play" it should say "2 DARK monsterS from play." just trying to help out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAlliance765 Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 OH! haha, thank you I'll fix them right away! EDIT: Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 This is an awesome card for your first...and you didn't use an overused angel pic! alright! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 it was all good until the last line.XD yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAlliance765 Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 By overused you mean like, how many times other people have used the pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 It's good, although the 1st listed effect looks overpowering.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 This is a really good card for your first 9/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 By overused you mean like' date=' how many times other people have used the pic?[/quote'] Yeah, usually when a newbie decides to make a card, it's almost always either 'Dark' 'Chaos' 'Angel' or 'Dragon', and they all end up using the same pics over and over again (myself included, >.<)So gj on not doing that. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAlliance765 Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 oh, ok. Thx for all the positive comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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