OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 This card can only be equipped if you control 1 monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK by 1500. If the equipped monster is placed in Defense Position, destroy this card. The equipped monster can attack up to 3 times per Battle Phase. The equipped monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If you control 1 other monster, destroy this card and the equipped monster.Updated.So I've redone the effect, because most people were complaining about it being underpowered. I think I might have OP'd it now...lol. We shall see. The art credit goes to...whoever draws for Fate Stay Night, actually, O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 eh... OCG errors a plenty, but you are getting there. I dont see the point in changing the monsters def and then not allowing it to be in def position, actually... Its not perfect, and it can be overpowered at times... 8/10 ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 7.5/10 what gave you this idea not bad though..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Uh...you want to point out some areas of OCG error?Even just general direction?Cuz just knowing somewhere in there is wrong doesn't help much.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Axe of Despair > this. *sigh* 6/10, too many srawbacks for the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Capitalize Defense Position.______________________________ An ok idea.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Axe of Despair > this. *sigh* 6/10' date=' too many srawbacks for the effect.[/quote'] Did I ever say this was better than Axe of Despair? No. Axe of Despair happens to be one of the most devastating ATK power-up equips I know. And even then, it's got a disgustingly simple effect. If I really wanted to, I could easily make one stronger than Axe, but then everyone would b*tch about how overpowered it was. Heck, if I made one with the same effect as Axe, people would probably b*tch about how overpowered it was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Axe of Despair > this. *sigh* 6/10' date=' too many srawbacks for the effect.[/quote'] Did I ever say this was better than Axe of Despair? No. Axe of Despair happens to be one of the most devastating ATK power-up equips I know. And even then, it's got a disgustingly simple effect. If I really wanted to, I could easily make one stronger than Axe, but then everyone would b*tch about how overpowered it was. Heck, if I made one with the same effect as Axe, people would probably b*tch about how overpowered it was. Then branch out into a different direction, instead of making a semi-inferior version of an already-created card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Axe of Despair > this. *sigh* 6/10' date=' too many srawbacks for the effect.[/quote'] Did I ever say this was better than Axe of Despair? No. Axe of Despair happens to be one of the most devastating ATK power-up equips I know. And even then, it's got a disgustingly simple effect. If I really wanted to, I could easily make one stronger than Axe, but then everyone would b*tch about how overpowered it was. Heck, if I made one with the same effect as Axe, people would probably b*tch about how overpowered it was. Then branch out into a different direction, instead of making a semi-inferior version of an already-created card. ...I didn't make this with Axe in mind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 ill help you out. This card can only be equipped if you have only 1 monster card in your control. Increase the equipped monster's ATK by 1000. Decrease the equipped monster's DEF to 0. The equipped monster cannot be placed in Defense Position. If your opponent has 2 or more monsters in their control, the equipped monster can attack twice. Your opponent can attack your Life Points directly. If another monster is placed in your control, destroy this card and the equipped monster. theres not that many ocg problems, just 1 or 2 here and there. but still, im not perfect, theres probably still some errors in my corrected effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fiffer Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 whoa thats cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Insectivore Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Well... I would put "under their control" not "in their control". And i think its got too many drawbacks for a double-attack/ATK-increase equip spell. I also think there's no point in decreasing the monsters DEF if it can't change to defence position. If i were you, instead of it being that the monster can't change to defence mode, i would make it a bonus if it does get changed, since i think it's a bit underpowered. Maybe a Life Point increase? Anyway, here's my rating: 6/10 You escaped becoming my prey... this time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 how about:You can only equip this card if you control 1 monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK by 1000. Also, the equipped monster's DEF becomes 0. The equipped monster cannot be placed in Defense Position. If your opponent controls 2 or more monsters on their field, the equipped monster can attack twice. Your opponent can attack your Life Points directly. If you control 1 other monster, destroy this and the equipped monster. and i agree with tectonix this is similar to axe of despair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
didaswiwaw Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 i like this card.. but i dont see any ocg errors (or it was me?) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 even though you updated it, the "Can attack 3 times" is really deadly, especially if its a high atk monster. maybe take that effect out, and then add some other positive effect. btw good ocg. 7-8ish/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Yeah, lol, wasn't overly happy with my change...but I'll keep playing around with it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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