my Ritual Card :D

[Crosspath]

Ok.... i dont get much on ritual stuff... is this the right format or OCG?

 

 

also... please post the OCG errors.... i dont think i did any but, i want to know.... well actually im 3/4 wrong all the time soo...

[OMGAKITTY]

Well, I'm not going to read the tiny font, so....

[cod4freak]

cool cards but 3000 life points come on!

[Crosspath]

Well' date=' I'm not going to read the tiny font, so....

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ok i get u xD

 

 

Celestial Sasoray, the Legend

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Celestial Story." You must also offer monsters whose total Levels Stars equal 7 as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Once per turn you can select 1 Celestial monster from your deck and add it to your hand. If the selected monster can be special summoned then you can destroy 2 cards on the field. If this card is removed from the field you can select 1 Celestial Story from your Graveyard and add it to your hand.

Celestial Zenata, the Legacy

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Celestial Story." You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 as a Tribute from your field or your hand. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Celestial monster in your graveyard to gain 500 x its level. If a Celestial monster is special summoned to your side of the field you can destroy 1 card you opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field you can select 1 out of play Celestial monster and 1 Celestial Story from your graveyard to your hand

Celestial Story

This card can only be activated if your life points are 3000 less then your opponents. This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Celestial Zenata, the Legacy" or "Celestial Sasoray, the Legend". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level if the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon.

[OMGAKITTY]

You don't need the tribute levels on the Ritual Monsters. Those only go on the spell card.

 

I'd say Ritual Summoned BY...but I'm not sure if that's a solid rule

 

"Celestial" <- quotations

Special Summoned...I'd say Special Summoned by it's own effect...because I think that's what you mean

"Celestial Story" <- quotes again

Graveyard

x500, not 500 x

Life Points, opponent's

This card is used to Ritual Summon...

[Steven Cope]

The Ritual format on the monsters is correct but on the Spell at the end it should be: You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level equals 7 or more from your Field or Hand.

Also on The 2nd monster, you gain 500 x its level in what? Life Points? ATK points? DEF points?

[Crosspath]

The Ritual format on the monsters is correct but on the Spell at the end it should be: You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level equals 7 or more from your Field or Hand.

Also on The 2nd monster' date=' you gain 500 x its level in what? Life Points? ATK points? DEF points?

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ah..... ok thanks for the post :D

[Kale]

Celestial Sasoray' date=' the Legend[/size']

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Celestial Story." You must also offer monsters whose total Levels Stars equal 7 as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Once per turn you can select 1 Celestial monster from your deck and add it to your hand. If the selected monster can be special summoned then you can destroy 2 cards on the field. If this card is removed from the field you can select 1 Celestial Story from your Graveyard and add it to your hand.

 

this card is overpowered for three reasons:

•you get to add a monster from your deck to your hand for free! this is overpowered because there is no cost, and you can activate it at any time. That isnt too overpowered though...

•the card you added most likely will be able to be special summoned. being able to add a free card to your hand, then destroy two cards for free is overpowered.

•when it is destroyed, you get the ritual card back. that means that you can summon the card you added to your hand next turn... most likely.

 

Suggested changes:

•add a life point cost, or a discard cost for the first effect. that would balance that out nicely...

•if the card can be special summoned, then you should discard the card to destroy only 1 card. that would be balanced.

•adding the card back to you hand is fine. ^_^

 

rating: 7/10

 

Celestial Zenata' date=' the Legacy[/size']

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Celestial Story." You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 as a Tribute from your field or your hand. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Celestial monster in your graveyard to gain 500 x its level. If a Celestial monster is special summoned to your side of the field you can destroy 1 card you opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field you can select 1 out of play Celestial monster and 1 Celestial Story from your graveyard to your hand

 

this card is overpowered for two reasons:

•too much life point increase. so far your two monsters are level 7, so then you would get an auto 3500 life point increase from removing one monster. that is too overpowered. you should lower it to 200 per level, because that would be more balanced. only 1400 life points for one monster, or 800 for a level 4 if you made one is balanced.

•when it is destroyed, you get back the removed monster and the ritual card. that means that you get back a monster next turn... then you can create a loop of endless life point gain... that should be changed to something less powerful.

 

rating:7/10

 

Celestial Story

This card can only be activated if your life points are 3000 less then your opponents. This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Celestial Zenata' date=' the Legacy" or "Celestial Sasoray, the Legend". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level if the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon.

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this one is a simple ritual card, so it is a perfect card, since there is nothing wrong with it. ^_^

 

total rating: 7/10.

 

~K