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Shining Ice Dragon


Ikeinator

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Dear God. Please learn now that the pic you used is one of the MOST overused pics here.

That aside, WATER monsters

"Blue Eyes White Dragon" <- in quotes

1, never 'one'

this card, not this beast

Summon (although in this case you're looking for Special Summon)

you're new, so you didn't know about the pic...I'll be nice and give this a 6.7/10

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Not a bad effort, but you have room for improvement. Y'see, since you can type in "Dragon" in DeviantArt and that's the first pic that comes up, it sees a lot of use, and generally people don't really like seeing pics they've seen before, I'm fine with it,, but some are touchy. ;)

 

Also, you might wanna crop the pic so that the URL in the bottom left corner isn't there.

 

The official card grammar could use some fixing, so I'll give ya a suggestion. =D

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 WATER monsters and 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon". When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand or Deck.

 

The circulation is rather unrealistic I'm afraid to say. It's best to leave it blank. Y'see, you can only use "Limited Edition" if you've got a gold sticker in the corner, which needs to be done with an image editor like PhotoShop, Paint, or FireWorks.

 

The Set ID was left blank, which is unrealistic. Your Set ID should be 4 letters in the first half, and in the second half, put EN and then 3-digits (in the range of 001 to 250). Remember, it's the details that make the card perfect.

 

Fix up alla that and your card'll be perfect. =D

 

Good work! ^_^

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