God GAK Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 [align=center]Alright guys, i haven't made a card for a long time so here goes. I made a mini set which consists of 2 monsters and 1 spell card. So, without any further ado, i present you: Twilight Knight, Everto Curse and Demon Knight: Twilight Knight: 2 VersionsEverto Curse: A Summoning Spell CardDemon Knight: The Ace card of this mini set![spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Everto Curse". Once per turn you can place 1 "Demon Token" (Fiend-Type/Dark/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 300) on your side of the field. "Demon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. The Token is destroyed at the End Phase of your turn. This effect can be activated during either player's turn. By sending 1 "Demon Token" on your side of the field to the Graveyard, inflict 400 Damage to your opponent. [/align] And that's all. I'd like to have some comments by you so that i can see how i am going. Oh, and the image credits go to the following:slipknot505 from DA for the Everto Curse image and planet renders for the other 2. so, have a nice time rating them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 They're nice, but they could be a bit better with OCG... - GD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 In what way better with ocg? If you are talking about release advance summon etc. I use the old wording the one with tribute tribute summon and the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Yea, I also think the old OCG is better, but I use mainly new.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 God Gak using a normal card??? I wouldn't expect that from you -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Well, i made it so that it could be balanced. if i added an effect to it i think that it would be more or less overpowered. I mean, look, if i am not wrong, Skilled DM is the only effect monster with 1900 atk and it doesn't have a so cool effect. however, now taht i think of it better, i have an idea. i could add an effect to him. wait some time and u will see it Version 2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 There are some OCG Errors, heres the fix:1st Card:During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Doom Counter on this card (max. 3). You can remove 3 Doom Counters from this card to add 1 "Everto Curse" from your Deck to your hand." , " after "Standby Phase, it's "place" not "put", i fixed the 2nd sentence for ya2nd Card:This card can only be activated on the 3rd turn of the Duel and by paying 1000 Life Points. Tribute 1 "Twilight Knight" you control to Special Summon 1 "Demon Knight" from your hand or Deck to your side of the field. The card Special Summoned by this card's effect cannot attack on the turn it was Summoned."on your side of the field" is outdated, "hand" goes before "Deck" lol :lol:. 3rd Card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Everto Curse". Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon Token" (Fiend-Type/Dark/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 300) in Attack Position. "Demon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon(or Set). The Token is destroyed at the End Phase of this turn. This effect can be activated during either player's turn. You can Tribute 1 "Demon Token" you control to the Graveyard, to inflict 400 Damage to your opponent.you forgot " , " after "Once per turn", you didn't say what Position the Tokens will be when Summoned, after "Tribute Summon" say "(or Set)" check Scapegoat, and you forgot to put "Special Summon" not "place", it should say "You can...", and "on your side of the field" is outdated. Hope These Help Dude, BTW, the pics are cool ^^^:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 for the spellthis card can only be activated after the third turn of the duel.doesnt that mean that you then have to summon the twilight knight in your first turn?work on that or explain it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Hm...thanks for the help. About the scapegoat thing, i checked it before and i removed it thinking of the most recent cards, we don't say this card cannot be tributed for a tribute summon or set, we say just "for a tribute summon". now, about the position of the tokens, i think, that if a reference of position is missing, you can summon it in any position. thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 BUMPAGE! Why do my card threads keep getting always less than 10 posts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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